新航道上海學(xué)校雅思頻道小編第一時(shí)間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2020年12月12日雅思大作文范文及解析：當(dāng)代名人是否能為年輕人做好榜樣?

  2020年12月12日雅思大作文題目

  Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  高分范文及解析

  01

  It is a well-known fact that people nowadays are overwhelmed by the information about the glamourous and wealthy lives of the celebrities instead of their achievements. I personally believe that it will result in negative effects on young people.

  解析

  開頭段結(jié)構(gòu)：背景+個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，即該社會(huì)現(xiàn)象確實(shí)會(huì)給年輕人帶來不利影響

  02

  On the one hand, the intentional promotion of the charm and wealth of celebrities may create a perception of "reap without sowing". In the past, it was celebrities’ outstanding achievements that made them famous in their respective fields, which were then appreciated by the public. Nowadays, however, although many people have gained their popularity, they still heavily rely on their so-called skin-beauty and lavish lifestyles rather than the achievements, due to the fact that the former one is easier to draw public’s attention, which makes young people firmly believe that they can gain fortune and fame without hardworking. Consequently, they may live in vanity but end up with nothing but void and regret.

  解析

  名人因魅力和財(cái)富而出名的會(huì)對年輕人的認(rèn)知產(chǎn)生影響——不勞而獲。

  03

  On the other hand, this phenomenon also leads young people to financial burden. Those people lack self-control, while they are skilled at imitating. Hence, they may spend time to know more about the sumptuous life of celebrities, and will imitate some of their behaviors and consumption habits. All these can cause a great cost of personal energy and a heavy economic pressure. For example, some young people even take out loans to follow the celebrities' ways of dressing regardless of their economic status, which will eventually make their normal life unsustainable.

  解析

  名人的生活方式會(huì)對年輕人的生活實(shí)際產(chǎn)生不利影響——過度消費(fèi)。

  04

  In conclusion, young people are easily susceptible to the superficial beauty and wealth the celebrities show to the public, which calls for the guidance to rectify this cognition.

  解析

  重申觀點(diǎn)