新航道上海學校雅思頻小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年9月4日雅思大作文范文及解析：無人駕駛汽車到底好還是不好?

  2021年9月4雅思大作文題目

  It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  本周的考題是《劍橋16》上的一道真題， 之前，我們也發布過這道真題的范文，所以，各位考生可要多多關注劍橋真題啦!

  高分范文及解析

  01

  The automotive industry is witnessing game-changing development, and this revolutionary change lies in the galloping of the driverless technology. As modern as they may look, those driverless vehicles are unexciting and rattling overall. (33 words)

  解析

  將題目中的cars，buses and trucks概括為automotive industry。在開頭段落清晰表明全文的主要觀點，無人駕駛總體而言令人不安。

  automotive 汽車的

  game-changing 變革性的

  revolutionary 革命性的

  gallop 快速發展(不及物動詞)

  rattling 使人不安的

  02

  Safety issues are the immediate concern. There have been reports about the malfunction of the Artificial Intelligence technology installed on the vehicles. There have also been reports about humans and AI struggling for the control over the steering wheel and the pedals. Those reports make quite a few people suspicious of whether the driverless technology is solid and reliable. As a matter of fact, this hazard is never officially negated, thereby remaining as the biggest drawback of this driverless technology. (80 words)

  解析

  主體第一段提出無人駕駛最大的缺點，即安全問題。安全問題里面又涉及兩個具體的理由。主體段開頭一般是比較概括性的句子，不需要寫太長，一上來就太長讀起來也會比較費勁。

  immediate 當前的

  malfunction 故障(可數名詞)

  install 安裝，安置(及物動詞)

  struggle 爭奪(不及物動詞，通常和for連用，struggle with sb for sth)

  quite a few 很多

  suspicious 不信任的，持有懷疑態度的(通常和of連用)

  solid 可靠的

  hazard 危險(可數名詞)

  negate 否認(及物動詞)

  03

  The deprivation of the fun of driving is another disappointment. The exciting “the sheer fun of driving” slogan may no longer be seen, and completely automatic cars (different from cars with the automatic gear) can hardly be exciting for a considerable number of male drivers, who finally are able to afford a nice car they have always wanted since their youth. What they want is the sense of coolness created by their skillful manipulation of the cars rather than the ease. The hands-off experience is certainly undesirable. (89 words)

  解析

  主體第二段提出無人駕駛的第二個缺點，中間使用舉例論證。頭尾兩個短句，中間兩個長難句，形成一種錯落有致的感覺。

  deprivation 剝奪

  disappointment 令人失望的事/人(可數名詞)

  automatic 自動的

  considerable 很大的

  sense of coolness 酷

  skillful 熟練的

  manipulation 操作

  ease舒適，安逸(不可數名詞)

  hands-off 放手的

  undesirable 不想要的

  04

  In fairness, the driverless technology is a groundbreakingadvance. At present, its development and application have afforded convenience and created economic benefits. Cars with this technology are easy to park and alert human drivers to potential collisions. Other vehicles using this technology are being used in more and more settings, such as airport shuttle buses and trains, and accordingly there have been reductions in the labor cost. (89 words)

  解析

  第三主體段是折中段。之前兩段都是在講無人駕駛的缺點，這一段簡單題一下優點，文章看起來更有批判性。

  in fairness 公平地說

  groundbreaking 革新的

  advance 進步

  application 運用(可數名詞)

  afford 提供(及物名詞)

  alert 使警惕(及物名詞，常和to連用，alert sb to do sth，alert sb to sth)

  collision 碰撞事故(可數名詞)

  05

  Overall, the driverless technology will eventually reach a high level of accuracy, precision and sophistication. But now the faults are evident, and the merits are less so. (27 words)

  解析

  結尾段概括總結，不需要細寫。再次點明主旨，就目前為止，無人駕駛的問題還是顯而易見的。

  accuracy 準確度(不可數名詞)

  precision 精確度(不可數名詞)

  sophistication 成熟度(不可數名詞)

  fault 缺點(可數名詞)

  evident 顯而易見的

  merit 優點(可數名詞)