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  2021年9月11日雅思大作文題目

  The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate.

  What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

  解析：

  本題討論“自然資源被飛快消耗”導(dǎo)致的問題和對(duì)應(yīng)的解決方案

  問題1：從生態(tài)角度考慮，如此快速地消耗會(huì)導(dǎo)致環(huán)境惡化;

  問題2：從經(jīng)濟(jì)角度考慮，能源消耗殆盡會(huì)導(dǎo)致國(guó)家發(fā)展受阻。

  方案1：不可再生資源，要節(jié)約;方案2：可再生資源，要推廣

  高分范文及解析

  01

  Unsustainable farming practices to feed our growing world population, together with excessive mining behavior and so on, are consuming resources faster than they can be replaced, which, if continuing unabated, can cause many adverse effects on ecology and economy. Luckily, these problems can be solved.

  解析

  unsustainable farming practices 不可持續(xù)的耕作方式

  excessive mining behavior 過度的開采行為

  unabated (程度上)不減的

  adverse effects on … 負(fù)面影響

  02

  There are problems behind energy overconsumption; one is that it will ruin the environment. To elaborate, the burning of fossil fuels and the continuing loss of forests that serve as carbon dioxide sinks have increased the concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, contaminating the air and generating global warming. Making things worse, human intervention in deforesting, farming, and polluting freshwater is depriving animals and plants of their habitats. This will threaten them with extinction. Another adverse effect we need to examine is that on the economy. As resources are becoming scarcer while the demand stays constant or even increases, the price of natural resources is set to rise significantly over time. This change is particularly hampering the economic growth in underdeveloped countries whose development heavily relies on the resources they may no longer be able to afford.

  解析

  concentration 濃度

  contaminate 污染

  generate 使形成

  human intervention 人類干預(yù)

  deprive … of … 剝奪

  scarce 缺乏的

  hamper 妨礙

  03

  Despite the numerous problems related to energy use, workable solutions exist. Firstly, to mitigate resource depletion, the government should introduce how detrimental the energy crisis is by media coverage. In this way, there will be a trend where, for example, the use of plastic and the disposal of things are seen as indecent, and resultingly, more resources will be saved. Secondly, it is a vital step to switch from non-renewable energies to alternative clean and renewable energies. With a proper budget permitted to develop renewable energy, scientists will be able to harness atomic, solar, and wind energy, with which the reliance on fossil ones can be reduced.

  解析

  workable solutions 可行的解決措施

  mitigate resource depletion 緩解能源枯竭

  detrimental 有害的

  indecent 不得體的

  harness 利用

  04

  In conclusion, the depletion of resources at an increased speed is likely to ruin the environment and stand in the way of social-economic development for many countries. Meanwhile, these problems can be tackled with proper intervention from the government.