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  2021年11月20雅思大作文題目

  The best way to solve traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  <獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)背景引入> With traffic congestion and road accidents intensifying, some propose that the most effective approach is to motivate people to dwell in cities rather than outskirts. Personally, I regard this proposal as indefensible and even preposterous.

  解析

  the best way的題型，絕對(duì)詞，站對(duì)立面好寫(xiě)，反駁best. 再仔細(xì)審題：解決交通問(wèn)題的最好辦法是讓人們都住進(jìn)城區(qū)，這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)與我們現(xiàn)實(shí)中主張的城市擴(kuò)張完全相反，更加確認(rèn)站其對(duì)立面更好寫(xiě)。

  ? intensify vt./vi. (使)加劇，(使)增強(qiáng)

  ? outskirt n. 常作outskirts，郊區(qū)

  ? indefensible adj. 站不住腳的

  ? preposterous adj. 荒謬的

  Body 1

  It is essential to try to understand why some people might advocate such a proposal. Once people live in cities with infrastructure adjacent to the residential area, their commuting distance will therefore be reduced to a large extent. In this case, commuters are more likely to opt for other travelling modes, such as walking, cycling, and taking public transport, instead of driving their private cars. Naturally, the number of vehicles on road will diminish, thus alleviating traffic and transportation problem to some degree. However, the aforementioned arguments in effect can hold no water. Instead, such action fuels traffic congestion, as cities will become intensely crowded and populated. City-dwellers flood into certain places during similar periods, which thus will incur slower traffic flows.

  解析

  讓步：鼓勵(lì)人們都住進(jìn)城市，那么某種程度上人們的通勤距離就短了，自然而然會(huì)選擇除私家車(chē)以外的同行方式，行駛的車(chē)輛少了，看上去交通問(wèn)題也就緩解了。反駁：集中住城區(qū)，人口密度增大，反而更擁擠。(試想一下北京的天通苑和南京江北的柳州東路，即使選擇坐地鐵，也堵到懷疑人生。)

  ? adjacent to adj. 鄰近

  ? commuter n. 通勤者

  ? opt vi. 選擇(opt for sth.; opt to do sth.)

  ? alleviate vt. 緩解

  ? fuel vt. 加劇

  ? be intensely crowded and populated 人口密集的

  ? flood vi. 大量地去

  ? incur vt. 導(dǎo)致(常作貶義)

  Body 2

  As a matter of fact, people who support this proposal mistakenly view longer travelling distance as the predominantcontributor to this problem. In reality, heavy traffic hinges on complex reasons, with high population density standing out. To illustrate, if residential areas are relocated and scattered, with each equipped with basic amenities, including hospitals, schools, shopping malls, etc., fewer residents will travel within certain areas. This thus can effectively address the problems of roads teeming with vehicles and public transport packed with commuters. / Besides, other remedies can also be put on agenda, including optimising road design, bettering public transit, and meanwhile encouraging working professionals to travel during off-peak hours.

  解析

  【解析】立論：更好的解決辦法應(yīng)該是反思路，分散人口，降低密度，從而疏散交通。順帶提一下其他老生常談的方法：優(yōu)化道路設(shè)計(jì)，完善公共交通，鼓勵(lì)錯(cuò)峰出行。

  ? predominant adj. 占主要位置的

  ? contributor n. 導(dǎo)致某事的人/事

  ? population density 人口密度

  ? scatter vt. 分散

  ? amenity n. 便利設(shè)施(常作復(fù)數(shù)amenities)

  ? teem with sb./sth. v. 充滿…

  ? remedy n. 消除辦法，糾正辦法

  ? put sth. on agenda 把…提上日程

  ? optimise vt. 優(yōu)化

  04

  In conclusion, migration to cities is far from perfection. A constructive approach to resolving the traffic issue will have to involve relocating certain public institutions and facilities, bettering the road system, and upgrading the public transport network.

  解析

  【解析】重申觀點(diǎn)

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