新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年4月21日雅思大作文范文及解析：政府和個人花太多錢在節日上。

  2022年4月21日雅思大作文題目

  In some countries, too much money is spent by both the government and individuals on national festivals, such as New Year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  Do both authorities and citizens allocate too many budgets to certain activities on traditional festivals? I can hardly endorse this.

  解析

  新題，但是從national festivals, such as New Year上可以看出來，觀點可以與“文化”掛鉤。此外，審題時需注意：(1) 觀點要同時覆蓋政府和個人兩方面;(2) 是否是“過多的”開銷;(3) 本題討論是否存在這個現象，而非是否“應該”存在這個現象，因此推導原因：即出于什么原因看，有無過度開銷，不能寫這么做會帶來什么利弊

   endorse vt. (正式)贊同，認可，支持

  Body 1

  Admittedly, both the government and individuals do allot certain revenues to celebrating national festivals. Religious and traditional activities, be they New Year's Gala or firework displays, are arranged by some nations and have long been a convention, even though the pandemics have impacted in recent years and required an enormous amount of expenditure. In this sense, some may assert that the money spent on national festivals should have been saved for the development of other fields more related to citizens’ basic survival. / Besides, such festivals are certainly regarded as times for celebration by individuals, who often take this as a good excuse to spend extra money on entertainment, especially when there are promotions or discount activities in shopping malls during festivals.// However, such spending is far from being ‘too much’ as long as both parties are rational enough.

  解析

  讓步：(1) 政府每年都會支出部分預算，舉辦各種傳統風俗活動，哪怕是在近幾年疫情影響下;(2) 個人層面，特殊節日時期，商場會推出促銷活動，而人們往往會以“節日特殊”為由，花費更多//反駁：這些開支并不過度，只要政府和個人理性做決定

   revenues n.[U] 收益，收入

   pandemic n.[C] [大范圍廣泛地區或全球性的]流行病，大流行病，瘟疫

   should have been done [語法] 應該做但是沒有做

   excuse n.[C] [辯解的]理由

   promotion n.[C] [產品的]促銷，推銷

  Body 2

  As a matter of fact, most authorities and individuals allocate their incomes to traditional activities properly. A responsible state usually takes every foreseeable factor into consideration based on the scenarios that year and arranges the budgets reasonably. Meanwhile, as those festivals feature diverse historical and cultural customs, a nation, with globalisation progressing, needs them to celebrate its cultural brilliance and magnificence to make a distinction from other countries./ Regarding individuals, who normally suffer from heavy working pressure, have the freedom to recharge their batteries during national holidays, and we should believe that a wise mature adult will never purchase blindly and render him or herself lost in debts simply owing to festival celebration.

  解析

  立論：(1) 負責任的政府會考慮當年的具體情況，合理規劃財政支出，同時政府需要利用這些節日來傳承背后的傳統文化和民族身份，尤其在當今全球化背景下;(2) 個人需要利用節日假期來娛樂，釋放壓力，且成熟的成年人也不會因為節日而盲目消費，導致債臺高筑

   foreseeable adj. 可預見到的

   feature vt. 以…為特色，是…的特征

   brilliance n.[U] 明亮，燦爛

   magnificence n.[U] 壯麗,宏偉;壯觀;輝煌

   make a distinction 有差別

  recharge one’s batteries 休息[放松]以恢復精力

  Conclusion

  In light of the above, neither the government nor individuals spend too much on national festivals.

  解析

  重申觀點