新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年6月4日雅思大作文范文及解析：學本國歷史更重要。

  2022年6月4日雅思大作文題目

  It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. Do you agree or disagree?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  Most school students nowadays are required to learn History as part of their studies, yet there still has been a debate over the content of this subject. Personally, I consider it short-sighted that greater significance should be attached to local history rather than world history.

  解析

  老題，母題為國內外文化類大話題，套上了“歷史”的外衣。注意題干中，“more important”，因此，equally important或less important都屬于disagree。相關話題：Some people think it is important for all children to learn history in school. Others believe that other subjects are more relevant to children’s lives today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  short-sighted adj. 短見的

  attach greater significance to sth. 認為…更重要

  Body 1

  It is understandable that so many people think learning local history is more important. This is mainly because it facilitates youngsters to shape a strong sense of national identity. Such is human nature that people tend to gravitate to novelty, so it is a commonplace that individuals, especially youngsters, are more likely to be attracted by exotic cultures instead of domestic ones that are often regarded as clichéd. Naturally, the influences of their own cultures will be undermined. To avoid local cultures from withering away, history about their motherland ought to be emphasised on school syllabuses, as history is closely bound up with the cultural legacies which allow students to build cultural confidence of their own nation.

  解析

  學習local history的重要性：建立文化自信和民族歸屬感

  facilitate sb. to do sth. 幫助某人做某事

  national identity n. 民族身份

  gravitate to vi. 被…吸引

  undermine vt. 逐漸削弱

  wither away vi. (尤指漸漸)破滅，消失

  syllabus n.[C] 教學大綱

  Body 2

  However, world history should be equally focused on as local history does in this increasingly globalised world, as the latter teaches students how their mother country is distinct from other lands and allows them to celebrate their own cultural brilliance, while the former enables them to gain a glimpse into diverse historical and cultural customs and thus creates mutual understanding among people with different cultural backgrounds. In other words, equipped with the knowledge regarding world history, students will be able to not only quickly adapt to their future study and work in a global scale and ponder issues from global perspectives but also contribute to eliminating the tension caused by cultural bias or misunderstanding in world affairs.

  解析

  學習world history的好處：消除文化誤解 + 吸收別國文化精華

  distinct from adj. 與…完全不同的

  gain a glimpse into 對…有一窺

  ponder vt. 仔細考慮

  eliminate vt. 消除

  tension n. 緊張局勢

  Conclusion

  In a nutshell, formal schooling should pay equal attention to both local and global history.

  解析

  重申觀點

  recapitulate v. 總結