新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年6月16日雅思大作文范文及解析：教育的主要目的是培養好公民?

  2022年6月16日雅思大作文題目

  Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  Schools do function as the place where children can be nurtured into eligible social members and workers, but personally this does not necessarily mean that the predominant purpose of formal schooling fails to lie in personal interest.

  解析

  2011年教育類老話題，重點抓住題干中的“rather than”，立場：不同意。篇章的構建上需注意，段落對應的主題句應該直接回應“是否同意教育的主要目的是培養好公民”，因此一段寫同意的觀點，一段寫不同意的觀點，每段可與“對個人的影響”作對比。

  【相關話題】2021.12.25 Some people believe that university students should pay all the costs of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

   function as vi. 起作用

   nurture vt. 培養

   eligible adj. 合格的

   predominant adj. 主要的

  Body 1

  Admittedly, formal schooling aims at injecting vitality into society by developing qualified citizens and providing workforce. To illustrate, teachers at school are required to equip children with not only academic knowledge in various fields but also practical skills ranging from empirical research to manual work so that students can, after graduation, engage themselves in all walks of life, which will in the long term guarantee society a more vigorous and productive workforce. Meanwhile, teachers are also partly responsible for imparting correct moral values into children’s mind, which prepares students to become righteous citizens who conform to the laws and regulation.

  解析

  讓步：教育確實旨在培養孩子成為好公民(德育)和好勞動力(理論+實踐)

   inject vitality into 注入活力到…

   equip sb. with sth. vt. 使某人配備…

   all walks of life n. 各行各業

   vigorous adj. 有活力的

   productive adj. 多產的

   impart vt. 傳授;給予(跟抽象名詞)

   righteous adj. 正直的

   conform to vi. 遵守

  Body 2

  However, the main purpose of education lies in benefitting students as individuals at the same time. It is through both academic and pragmatic courses by schools that students acquire professional knowledge and skills which will facilitate them to secure a decent job with a generous salary so as to earn their daily sustenance after graduation. Meanwhile, having participated in diverse extracurricular activities, students can also sharpen their wits, cultivate people skills, and spice up their lives, by which they can quickly adapt to society after leaving school and find their own value to the community they are involved in. In other words, young-school leavers are able to build their self-confidence and thus satisfy their spiritual demands.

  解析

  [立論] 對個人有好處：1. 物質層面：找到工作，養活自己;2. 精神層面：融入社會，找到自己的價值，建立自信

   secure vt. 獲得

   generous adj. 慷慨的，大量的

   people skills n. 人際交往

   spice up vi. 增添趣味

  Conclusion

  In light of the above, the function of formal education is to exert positive impacts on both individuals and society as a whole.

  解析

  重申觀點

  ? exert vt. 施加