雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目，也是難以提高的科目。新航道 章躍老師分享小作文的地圖 工業區改造，希望能對即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!

  The naps below show an industriai area in the town of Norbiton, and pfannedfufure development of the site.

  summarlse the informatlon by seiecting and reporting the main features,andnake comparisons where relevant.

  Write at least 150 words.

  時間：現在 VS 將來

  不僅僅用【相對位置】為寫作思路，還可以用【路線】為寫作思路。

  用【路線】思路寫作的時候，【起點】很重點。更重要的是要【設置一個訪客】。

  變化多、東西多的時候，用【模糊寫法】。

  【開頭段】

  第1句話，介紹圖的主題。

  第2句話，對圖進行【宏觀綜述】。內容可以固定套路為【變化大不大】。

  1. Shown in the maps is a comparison between an industrial area’s present layout and a development plan for the future.

  2. Overall, the development will immensely change the area.

  【主體部分第1段】

  第1和2句，介紹工業區整體的相對位置，以及進入的路徑。此時，還是用的“上帝視角”(俯瞰)。

  第3句開始，出現【訪客】，開始【路線】寫法。

  1. First, the area will remain east of the town and south of the farmland across the river.

  2. It will still be accessible via the road going in a west-east direction.

  3. A visitor will first reach a small roundabout, finding the initial change, and then see shops and a medical center – two additions, behind which will be the larger roundabout.

  【主體部分第2段】

  變化多、東西多的時候，用【模糊寫法】，不需要特別具體。不是需要讀者根據我們的作文把圖畫出來，而是我們的作文吻合圖的樣子。

  1. Reaching the larger roundabout, a changed view will immediately appear.

  2. All manufacturing plants will be removed.

  3. The roundabout will branch off to the northwest, and the branch will lead to two residential zones.

  4. Turing right, the plants alongside and at the end of the present branch road will all be gone and replaced with housing, a playground, and a school.

  5. In addition, the visitor will be able to go further in a northerly direction taking a new road extending across the river and will find another housing zone in the farming area.

  第1和4句，開頭的地方是動詞分詞詞組的“懸垂”現象，作為句子的狀語。這種現象的用法很微妙。老章用到了，但是不要求大家使用，大家可用狀語從句替代。

  詞匯當然值得注意，要學會。

  【結尾段】

  可有可無(在開頭段已經有了對于圖的【宏觀綜述】的情況下)。

  All in all, the change will be remarkable.