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摘要:新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年7月9日雅思大作文范文及解析:缺乏鍛煉的原因和解決辦法。
新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年7月9日雅思大作文范文及解析:缺乏鍛煉的原因和解決辦法。
2022年7月9日雅思大作文題目
It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem?
高分范文及解析
Introduction
Nowadays, seldom do city-dwellers participate in outdoor activities. Behind such phenomenon are two predominant culprits, and hopefully some feasible approaches can be adopted.
解析
說明文,問原因和解決辦法。也是去年上半年的主流話題:缺乏鍛煉。審題中,it is difficult盡量寫外因。類似話題:2021.4.17 Young people do not spend their holiday and weekend doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environment. Why? How to encourage them to go out?
culprit n.[C] (不好事情的)原因
Reasons
To commence, the lack of public facilities for exercising should be responsible for this problem. This is mainly because the majority of metropolises have been occupied by residential areas with amenities to satisfy the demands of the surging population, as so many people have flooded into large cities for better job opportunities. In this case, it is hard for residents to seek an open area for outdoor exercising. Besides, it is due to the rat race in either study or work that people from all walks of life should work non-stop to have an edge over their counterparts. Naturally, wrapped up in their daily tasks, they lack either the time or the energy to have enough physical exercise.
解析
兩點原因:1. 城市人口多而擁擠,缺乏公共運動設施;2. 平日工作或學業繁忙,沒有時間體育鍛煉。
metropolis n.[C] 大都市
amenity n.[C] 福利設施
rat race 激烈的競爭
counterpart n.[C] 相對應的人或事
be wrapped up in 忙于做某事(以至于沒有精力關心其他事)
Solutions
Considering the gravity of this issue, two schemes can be put on the agenda. The first imperative approach is that the government can allocate more budgets and sites to constructing public facilities like parks and sports centres. Given more accessible sports facilities, residents are more likely to get physical exercise whenever they are available. Additionally, educational institutions, businesses, and community can on a regular basis arrange several outdoor activities such as excursions, mountain-climbing, and sports meeting. In this way, students, young working professionals, and community members can be called on to slow down their pace and smell the roses.
解析
解決辦法:1. 政府合理規劃,提供設施;2. 學校、公司或社區定期組織戶外活動。
gravity n. [局勢]嚴重性
imperative adj. 迫切的
excursion n. 遠足
working professional n. 上班族
smell the roses 享受生活[尤指親近自然]
Conclusion
In a nutshell, since possible factors and workable remedies have been clarified, this thorny issue can be promisingly addressed through joint efforts from several parties.
解析
一句話總結:各方通力合作,問題就能被解決。
remedy n. 糾正方法
thorny adj. 棘手的
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