2022/8/4 14:00:03來源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目,也是難以提高的科目。新航道 章躍老師分享小作文的表格 三家醫院的滿意度,希望能對即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!
雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目,也是難以提高的科目。新航道 章躍老師分享小作文的表格 三家醫院的滿意度,希望能對即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!
表格 三家醫院的滿意度 – 2021.03.04真題
The table below gives information about the patients’ evaluation of three hospitals in four different aspects.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
* 數據圖:【表格】
* 此圖為【同時不同項】:比較關系存在于橫向四個不同方面間,也存在于縱向三家醫院間。
【開頭段】
Shown in the table is patients’ satisfaction with three hospitals from four different aspects.
● 第一句開頭的【倒裝】。注意動詞的單復數由倒置后的主語決定。
【主體部分第1段】
寫主體段前,先對表格信息進行分組:找異同點。觀察可發現,前兩列三家醫院的數據存在差距,而后兩列的數據相對平衡。
In terms of service aftercare and treating, the evaluation of patients in three hospitals approximatedto each other. 總——分,遞進 The former aspect is notable: there was a minute gap among the percentages, whose range was between 70% and 83%. Likewise, the discrepancy regarding the latter aspect was a bit wider, [獨立主格] with the rates varying from 68% to 85%.
● 第一句和后面的句子是【總——分】和【遞進】關系。
● 【注意以下 常見單詞不常見的詞義】
● approximate to vi. 接近,近似
● minute adj. 極小的
【主體部分第2段】寫表格中的其它數值。
By stark contrast, there was a disparity among the assessment of three hospitals in two remaining aspects. The hospital staff won the approval of about three quarters of patients in hospital A and over four fifths in hospital C, while merely less than two fifths of patients were content with hospital B’s workers. Similarly, almost all the patients in hospital C were satisfied with the waiting time, while two remainders only contented nearly a half of their patients.
● 段與段之間的銜接也要做好
● 注意【現象描述】的寫法,而不是單純羅列數據
● 注意【程度副詞的使用】
● disparity n.[C] 不同;懸殊(自帶huge的程度)
【結尾段】
Overall, hospital C received the best evaluation, while the two remainders were less satisfactory.
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