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  When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  本文立場(chǎng)：偏向于【同意】。

  同意的【理由】：1)在公園和運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施里以經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)惠的方式度過閑暇時(shí)光要比去購(gòu)物中心花錢更好。2)公園和運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施更有利于健康的生活，健康優(yōu)先于購(gòu)物。

  【段落示范】(開頭段)

  1. In many countries, new towns are being developed.

  這一句簡(jiǎn)要寫一個(gè)背景。

  2. In the planning of those towns, planners should consider developing public parks and sports facilities before they build shopping centers so that people would have economical and healthful leisure.

  這一句陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，如果是同意，那就是轉(zhuǎn)述題目的意思即可。

  注意：在開頭段的時(shí)候就直接濃縮了理由的兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞：“economical”和“ healthful”，這樣的作文在內(nèi)容上得分會(huì)很高。

  【段落示范】(主體部分第一段)

  1. First, public parks are free, and many sports facilities ask for a small amount of admission fee.

  解釋開頭段里的“economical”，并且作為第一個(gè)理由的“總”句。

  2. In other words, recreation would be at little cost to the local residents.

  用“換句話說”的方式，對(duì)第一句進(jìn)行【進(jìn)一步解釋】?！皳Q句話說”這個(gè)套路，要學(xué)會(huì)。

  3. This is an advantage of those facilities over shopping malls, where people are likely to spend money.

  這里通過“This”【指代】上一句的內(nèi)容，并且句子通過“an advantage over”讓公園和運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施對(duì)比優(yōu)于購(gòu)物中心。

  4. In fact, the expenditure may be a considerable sum.

  *“事實(shí)上”引導(dǎo)【遞進(jìn)】，對(duì)上一句的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行拓展，加強(qiáng)對(duì)比。

  5. For example, when my hometown was developed from scratch, the local residents displayed tremendous welcome for the lakeside park and sports center.

  【舉例】的方式，用現(xiàn)實(shí)來說明公園和運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施是優(yōu)選。例子可以加強(qiáng)論證。

  【解析】

  一、內(nèi)容維度(Task Response)：***特別重要***

  審題時(shí)候注意題目中講到了目的“for people to spend their free time in”。所以，寫作內(nèi)容必須對(duì)應(yīng)這個(gè)目的，【其它的內(nèi)容，可能會(huì)走題】。

  其它，見文中批注。

  二、文脈邏輯維度(Coherence and Cohesion)：***尤其重要***

  見文中批注。

  三、詞匯維度(Lexical Resource)：

  文中紅色和藍(lán)色加粗的詞匯，都值需要記憶和學(xué)會(huì)。

  四、語(yǔ)法和句型維度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)：

  【開頭段】第1句中的“so that”引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。

  【開頭段】第2句和【主體部分第1段】第2句中的“would”，都是故意用了對(duì)于未來不過分絕對(duì)篤定的語(yǔ)氣。