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摘要:新航道上海學(xué)校雅思頻道小編第一時(shí)間帶來(lái)分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對(duì)各位備考考生們有所幫助,對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作有所提高!本文是2022年8月13日雅思大作文范文及解析:消費(fèi)品導(dǎo)致環(huán)境破壞的原因及解決辦法。
新航道上海學(xué)校雅思頻道小編第一時(shí)間帶來(lái)分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對(duì)各位備考考生們有所幫助,對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作有所提高!本文是2022年8月13日雅思大作文范文及解析:消費(fèi)品導(dǎo)致環(huán)境破壞的原因及解決辦法。
2022年8月13日雅思大作文題目
The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
高分范文及解析
Introduction
With more consumer goods produced, the environmental problem has been intensified. Personally, behind this problem are two predominant culprits, and this issue can be promisingly tackled.
解析
老題,說(shuō)明文。注意原因部分,是什么原因?qū)е孪M(fèi)品的增加,進(jìn)而導(dǎo)致自然環(huán)境的破壞。
intensify vt. 加劇
culprit n.[C] 不好事情的原因
Reasons
To start with, the surging population should be responsible for this phenomenon. This is mainly because the huge population has naturally brought the increasing demands for consumer goods. To meet such needs, people are in dire need of not only a colossal quantity of raw materials but also vast areas of land for establishing an overwhelming number of factories, both of which contribute to the environment deterioration. A typical example is that more trees are cut down for furniture and fuels are tapped for electricity production, incurring deforestation and soil degradation. Besides, it is clever advertising, which usually exaggerates the functions and features of products, that lures consumers into buying new consumer goods and gradually following the trend of the throw-away culture. This has also naturally brought the increase in the production of goods, which wreaks havoc on the natural environment.
解析
原因1:人口激增 → 需求增加;原因2:受廣告誘惑 → 買(mǎi)更多商品;這兩個(gè)原因最終都導(dǎo)致環(huán)境的破壞
colossal adj. 巨大的
overwhelming adj. 巨大的,壓倒性的
deterioration n. 惡化
deforestation n. 砍伐樹(shù)林
degradation n. 退化
exaggerate vt. 夸大
lure vt. 引誘
wreak havoc on vi. 造成威脅
Solutions
Considering the gravity of this issue, corresponding schemes can be put on the agenda. The first imperative approach is that the government should issue policies regarding subsidisation to motivate businesses to develop new products by tapping renewable or recyclable materials. Meanwhile, additional tax can be imposed upon the factories that discharge tonnes of swage and toxic gases. Driven by such policies, producers are more likely to manufacture more environmentally-friendly products. Additionally, public-service advertisements can be made to publicise the hazards of the throw-away culture, which can raise consumers’ awareness of purchasing goods more rationally.
解析
方法1:政府補(bǔ)貼鼓勵(lì)公司研發(fā)對(duì)環(huán)境友好的新產(chǎn)品 + 對(duì)環(huán)境破壞嚴(yán)重的公司征稅;方法2:教育大眾理性消費(fèi)
gravity n. 嚴(yán)重性
imperative adj. 迫切的
subsidisation n. 補(bǔ)貼
tap vt. 開(kāi)發(fā),利用
impose vt. 強(qiáng)制推行
swage n. 污水
hazard n. 害處
Conclusion
In the light of the above, since possible factors and feasible remedies have been clarified, it is advised that relevant parties take actions immediately.
解析
重申觀點(diǎn)
remedy n.[C] 補(bǔ)救方法
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