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上海新航道雅思小編發(fā)布2017.4.22雅思寫作大作文范文,希望幫助考生對(duì)照寫作范文研究真題,充分備考,爭取理想成績,實(shí)現(xiàn)留學(xué)夢想。
2017年4月22日雅思大作文題目
Some people think advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals not satisfied with what they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
2017年4月22日雅思大作文解析
本次考試是關(guān)于對(duì)廣告的看法。對(duì)廣告,我們平時(shí)討論都很多,一般是愛恨交加的情緒,因此烤鴨不會(huì)沒有思路??v觀雅思近年考試,廣告類話題出現(xiàn)頻率很高,而且也經(jīng)常出現(xiàn),大家備考應(yīng)該多關(guān)注這個(gè)話題。
雅思寫作7分范文
Nowadays we cannot go anywhere without seeing advertisements of one kind or another. The penetration of advertising into our life has gone so far that sometimes we even feel amazed by its ubiquity. Advertising is, of course, very useful, informing us about what to buy, where to buy and how to buy, but it also has negative effects on individuals.
With attractive designs and images, advertising, on top of being informative, tries to persuade people to spend money on the commodities or services it promotes. This is important to the economic development of a country. As a matter of fact, we can even find a close association between the strength of a country’s economy and the visibility of its advertising. The more advertisements are seen in a country, the more developed its economy is. The reason is simply that advertising encourages people to consume, even more than is necessary for them, and consumption, as our economics textbook would tell us, is key to the economic development.
However, advertising may also bring about negative impacts on individuals as well as the society. For one thing, advertising may make us less content with what we have and what we are now and leave us craving hopelessly for those unattainable commodities. I still remember a few days ago when walking in front of a supermarket, I saw how a little girl, with her eyes glued on an advertising board, pestered her mother for the expensive toy on it that her mother apparently could not afford. Advertising, then, while providing us with useful commodities information, also creates the unwanted desire at our heart and makes us unhappy. For another thing, lured by the promises of advertising, some people may choose to commit crimes, which then causes a lot of social problems. A student, for instance, may rob his classmate of an iphone 8, for he was told by advertising that claims iphone 8 is superior to its previous versions. Likewise, an official may take bribery to buy an expensive house by the lake because the advertising says the luxury of living there is superb.
In my view, advertising is necessary in our economic life and therefore, it should not be banned. Yet those misleading advertisements ought to be well kept in check, and individuals should try their best to stay as far as possible away from the negative effects of advertising.
新航道唐老師修改版:
1)Nowadays we cannot go anywhere without seeing advertisements of one kind or another. The penetration of advertising into our life has gone so far that sometimes we even feel amazed by its ubiquity. Advertising is, of course, very useful,informing us about what to buy, where to buy and how to buy, but it also has negative effects on individuals.
今天,我們走到任何地方都能看到各種各樣的廣告。廣告深入到我們生活,已經(jīng)如此之深,有時(shí)候我們甚至驚嘆其無所不在了。廣告當(dāng)然很有用,它告訴我們買什么,去什么地方買,怎么買,但是廣告對(duì)個(gè)人也有負(fù)面影響。
(1) 本段以描寫廣告的普遍性來引入話題。
(2) Advertisements of one kind or another這樣那樣的廣告(各種各樣的廣告)
(3) Penetration 深入 (n.)
(4) Ubiquity 無所不在(n.) ubiquitous 無所不在的(adj.)
(5) Inform 告訴
2)With attractive designs and images, advertising, on top of being informative, tries to persuade people to spend money on the commodities or services it promotes. This is important to the economic development of a country. As a matter of fact, we can even find a close association between the strength of a country’s economy and the visibility of its advertising. The more advertisements are seen in a country, the more developed its economy is. The reason is simply that advertising encourages people to consume, even more than is necessary for them, and consumption, as our economics textbook would tell us, is key to the economic development.
除了提供信息,廣告還用吸引人的設(shè)計(jì)和圖像試圖勸說人們花錢購買其推銷的商品或服務(wù)。這對(duì)一個(gè)國家的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展很重要。事實(shí)上,我們甚至能發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)國家經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)力與廣告的可見度之間有緊密聯(lián)系。一個(gè)國家能看見的廣告越多,其經(jīng)濟(jì)就越發(fā)達(dá)。理由很簡單,廣告鼓勵(lì)人們消費(fèi)(甚至超過其需要的程度),而正如經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)課本講的那樣,消費(fèi)是經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的關(guān)鍵所在。
(1)本段討論廣告對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的作用:先從兩者的聯(lián)系談起,然后從理論上論證。當(dāng)然,唐老師的理論也是非常淺顯的,而且不會(huì)去深入,比如為什么消費(fèi)就有利于經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展?這個(gè)問題唐老師說不清楚,也不需要說清楚。
(2)Informative 有信息量的
(3)Persuade 勸說
(4)Association 聯(lián)系;聯(lián)想
(5)Visibility 可見度;能見度
(6)Consume 消費(fèi)
3)However, advertising may also bring about negative impacts on individuals as well as the society. For one thing, advertising may make us less content with what we have and what we are now and leave us craving hopelessly for those unattainablecommodities. I still remember a few days ago when walking in front of a supermarket, I saw how a little girl, with her eyes glued to an advertising board,pestered her mother for the expensive toy on it that her mother apparently could not afford. Advertising, then, while providing us with useful commodities information, also creates the unwanted desire at our heart and makes us unhappy. For another thing,lured by the promises of advertising, some people may choose to commit crimes, which then causes a lot of social problems. A student, for instance, may rob his classmate of an iphone 8, for he was told by advertising that iphone 8 is superior toits previous versions. Likewise, an official may take bribery to buy an expensive house by the lake because the advertising says the luxury of living there is superb.
然而,廣告也能給個(gè)人和社會(huì)帶來負(fù)面影響。第一,廣告可能讓我們對(duì)已經(jīng)擁有的和現(xiàn)在的地位不滿,讓我們十分渴望那些得不到的東西。我仍記得幾天前,我路過一家超市時(shí),看見一個(gè)小女孩眼巴巴地盯著一個(gè)廣告牌,纏著她母親買上面宣傳的一個(gè)昂貴的玩具,但很顯然,她目前買不起這個(gè)玩具。因此,廣告在給我們提供有用的商品信息時(shí),也在我們內(nèi)心制造了不合適的欲望,讓我們不幸福。其二,受廣告言辭的誘惑,有些人甚至選擇犯罪,而這又引起很多社會(huì)問題。比如,一個(gè)學(xué)生可能會(huì)搶他同學(xué)的iphone8,因?yàn)閺V告告訴他,iphone8優(yōu)于之前的版本。同樣,一個(gè)官員可能接受賄賂去買一座昂貴的湖邊房子,因?yàn)閺V告說,住在那里會(huì)盡享豪華。
(1)本段講廣告對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生的壞影響:廣告可能造成我們不滿現(xiàn)狀,導(dǎo)致不幸福;廣告可能導(dǎo)致犯罪等社會(huì)問題。唐老師都通過恰當(dāng)?shù)呐e例來論證。
(2)Impact 影響
(3)Be content with... 滿足于
(4)Crave for... 渴望
(5)Unattainable 不可獲得的;不能實(shí)現(xiàn)的
(6)Glue one’s eyes to... 緊盯著......
(7)Pester for... 纏著要......
(8)Lure 誘惑......
(9)Be superior to... 比......好
(10)Superb 絕妙的
4)In my view, advertising is necessary in our economic life and therefore, it should not be banned. Yet those misleading advertisements ought to be well kept in check, and individuals should try their best to stay as far as possible away from the negative effects of advertising.
我認(rèn)為,廣告在我們的經(jīng)濟(jì)生活中很有必要,因此不應(yīng)該被禁止。但是,那些誤導(dǎo)性的廣告應(yīng)該得到有效控制,而個(gè)人則應(yīng)該努力遠(yuǎn)離廣告的負(fù)面影響。
(1)本段為結(jié)論段,提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。
(2)Misleading 誤導(dǎo)性的
(3)Keep...in check 控制......
以下是 新航道雅思唐老師收集的近 5 年雅思廣告類作文的命題方向。
1、2014/11/13
食品廣告是否應(yīng)該和香煙廣告一樣被禁止?
Researchers show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, advertising for food products should be banned, in the same way as the cigarette advertising is banned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2、2013/5/16
廣告是否影響到人們的思維方式,產(chǎn)生負(fù)面作用?
Today advertising can be seen everywhere in daily life. It has influenced what people think and has negative effects. Give your opinion on this topic.
3、2012/5/10
用戶會(huì)受廣告影響嗎?如何保護(hù)用戶不受廣告影響?
Nowadays consumers are faced with the advertisements from competitive companies. To what extent do you agree that consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures should be taken to protect them?
4、2012/7/7
廣告旨在增加產(chǎn)品銷售數(shù)量,而不是推廣其質(zhì)量。你覺得這個(gè)說法有道理嗎?
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising usually encourages consumers to buy a product or service in quantity rather than promoting its quality.
5、2012/10/27; 2015/7/11
廣告讓我們變得相同,從而失去個(gè)性,你同意嗎?
Advertising discourages us from being different individuals by making us all want to be and to look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
6、2011/6/25
廣告到處都是,極大影響了我們的生活。那么,廣告的積極作用多,還是消極作用多?
We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which significantly influence our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects?
7、2016/2/20; 2014/4/24;2016/7/9
針對(duì)孩子的廣告應(yīng)該禁止嗎?
Nowadays, there is a large amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think they have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
總結(jié)
廣告話題,唐老師總結(jié)以下觀點(diǎn),供烤鴨參考。
● 廣告可傳遞信息(informative)
● 廣告鼓勵(lì)人們消費(fèi),有利于社會(huì)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā) 展
● 設(shè)計(jì)美觀,可以給我們的生活增添亮色,具有美學(xué)效果(aesthetic)
● 廣告往往夸大其辭(exaggerating),誤導(dǎo)性強(qiáng)(misleading),從而讓消費(fèi)者上當(dāng)受騙。
● 廣告往往通過各種方式制造消費(fèi)欲望,讓消費(fèi)者花錢購買很多不必要的商品(buy things they do not really need),從而引發(fā)一系列社會(huì)問題(social problems)。
● 廣告往往顯示社會(huì)差異,容易讓人失去心理平衡。
具體到本次考試,其特點(diǎn)是對(duì)廣告的影響加以具體限定:即廣告有利于經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展,同時(shí)廣告會(huì)引起人們對(duì)自己的現(xiàn)狀不滿足。要求討論雙方觀點(diǎn),然后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。首先,廣告鼓勵(lì)人們消費(fèi),刺激人們的消費(fèi)欲望,的確有利于社會(huì)的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。其次,廣告常常宣傳一些高檔消費(fèi)產(chǎn)品,讓很多人產(chǎn)生渴望,從而對(duì)自己的生活現(xiàn)狀不滿足,產(chǎn)生不幸福的感覺,同時(shí),為了獲得廣告宣傳的產(chǎn)品,有些人甚至?xí)b而走險(xiǎn),走上犯罪的道路。結(jié)論是:廣告的確是有必要的,但要限制誤導(dǎo)性的廣告,同時(shí)用戶也應(yīng)該積極調(diào)整心態(tài),盡量避免受到廣告負(fù)面影響。
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