雅思寫作是中國(guó)考生們的一大頭疼科目，難以提高的科目.今天，上海新航道雅思小編給大家?guī)砹?019.1.26雅思考試機(jī)經(jīng)回憶解析寫作Task2范文--女性適合當(dāng)警察或參軍嗎? 希望幫助考生對(duì)照寫作范文研究真題，充分備考，爭(zhēng)取理想成績(jī)，實(shí)現(xiàn)留學(xué)夢(mèng)想。

  Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  解析&審題

  本題與2016年5月19日的話題幾乎重合，但2016年5月 19日題目沒有涉及police force，只涉及military force。盡管如此，兩次考題性質(zhì)幾乎是一樣的。

  題目的核心觀點(diǎn)是：有些人認(rèn)為男性和女性可以平等地加入警察和部隊(duì)，而其他人認(rèn)為女性不適合這類工作。因此，本問題其實(shí)問的就是：到底女性能否像男人一樣當(dāng)警察和軍人?對(duì)這種問題，無非可能有如下三種態(tài)度：(1)同意，女性可以當(dāng)警察，可以參軍;(2)不同意，女人不可以當(dāng)警察參軍;(3)部分同意，部分不同意，女人可以當(dāng)警察參軍，但分工應(yīng)該與男人不同，不能同等。

  如果我們寫第一種和第二種觀點(diǎn)，我們就必須要列舉2-3條肯定和否定的理由(比如，身體原因，心理原因，社會(huì)原因等);如果我們寫第三種觀點(diǎn)，我們就既要分析肯定的理由，又要分析否定的理由，并在最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，比如認(rèn)為女性可以參軍，但在這份工作里的分工應(yīng)該有別于男性等等。

  這個(gè)題目吊詭的地方就是，有些同學(xué)可能擔(dān)心自己的“政治正確性”(political correctness)，即比較害怕討論第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，似乎這樣就是不尊重女性，就是歧視女性。但唐老師認(rèn)為，如果你覺得第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)更好表達(dá)，你完全可以寫第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)(當(dāng)然，你可以想辦法把自己的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)得更加soft一些)。雅思考試一般不會(huì)因?yàn)槟愕恼握_性來扣分，主要還是看你是否通過恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言表達(dá)出了你需要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)。

  現(xiàn)在，你就仔細(xì)來看看唐老師是如何來表達(dá)這個(gè)“政治不正確”的觀點(diǎn)的。

  老師筆記

  01

  Just 100 years ago, policewomen or women soldiers were basically unheard of, yet now in many countries, women can be part of the police force and military force. Not afraid of the accusation of being biased against women or even male chauvinistic, I strongly believe that men and only men should be members of the police and military force.

  僅僅100年前，女警或女兵基本上是聞所未聞的，但現(xiàn)在許多國(guó)家，女性可以成為警察部隊(duì)和軍事力量的一部分。不怕被指責(zé)我對(duì)女性抱有偏見或甚至是大男子主義，我強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)為，男子且只有男子才應(yīng)該是警察和軍事力量的成員。

  解析

  (1)本段提出現(xiàn)象，并直接表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

  (2)basically 基本上

  (3)accusation 指責(zé)

  (4)bias 偏見

  (5)chauvinistic 大男人主義的

  02

  In the first place, being a policeman or soldier is extremely demanding physically. With very few exceptions, women are not possibly able to withstand the long hours of military training. For example, a policeman or a soldier sometimes has to remain exposed to the strong sunlight or the heavy storms hours after hours, or run many miles with heavy things carried with him. This means a soldier must possess great strength, stamina and endurance.While I am not willing to say that all women are lacking in these qualities, I am pretty sure that most women are not physically fit to do all this.

  首先，當(dāng)警察或士兵對(duì)身體的要求是非常苛刻的。除了極少數(shù)例外，女性不可能經(jīng)得起長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的軍事訓(xùn)練。例如，一名警察或一名士兵有時(shí)不得不幾小時(shí)暴露在烈日或風(fēng)暴中，或帶著沉重的東西跑好幾英里。這意味著一個(gè)士兵必須擁有力量、耐力和忍耐度。雖然我不愿意說所有的女性都缺乏這些素質(zhì)，但我很肯定大多數(shù)女性身體上都不適合做這些事情。

  解析

  (1)本段從身體方面論證女性不適合從事警察或軍人的工作。

  (2)demanding 要求很高的

  (3)exception 例外

  (4)withstand 受得住

  (5)expose...to... 置身于......中

  (6)stamina 耐力

  (7)be lacking in... 缺乏......

  03

  Furthermore, if a woman plans to join the police or the army, she will have to deal with a number of social issues. For instance, her parents may have strong objections to this choice of hers, because with a daughter in the police or army, they may meet with inquiring and doubtful eye from their neighbors and friends. It was for this reason that my cousin sister had to give up her dream of becoming a soldier. Even if a woman does become part of the police or the army, she will have to learn to face a world full of the opposite sex. She may feel completely at odds with the rules and disciplines which are designed predominantly for men.

  此外，如果一名女性計(jì)劃加入警察或軍隊(duì)，她將不得不面對(duì)一些社會(huì)問題。例如，她的父母可能強(qiáng)烈反對(duì)她的這種選擇，因?yàn)槿襞畠涸诰旎蜍婈?duì)，他們可能會(huì)遇到鄰居和朋友的詢問和懷疑的目光。正是因?yàn)檫@個(gè)原因，我表妹不得不放棄了她成為一個(gè)士兵的夢(mèng)想。即使一個(gè)女性成為警察或軍隊(duì)的一員，她也必須學(xué)會(huì)面對(duì)一個(gè)充滿異性的世界。她可能會(huì)覺得與那些主要是為男性而設(shè)計(jì)的規(guī)則和紀(jì)律格格不入。

  解析

  (1)本段從社會(huì)的角度論證女性不適合當(dāng)警察或參軍。

  (2)objection 反對(duì)

  (3)inquiring 詢問的

  (4)the opposite sex 異性

  (5)be at odds with... 與......格格不入

  (6)predominantly 主要地

  04

  To conclude, physically, emotionally, and socially speaking, women are not suitable to serve in the police or armed forces. However, this does not mean that women do not have their share of responsibility to protect their country. As a supporter of "labor distribution" theory, I think women can help the men serving in the police and the army by taking care of their parents, children, and the family. This is as important as working in the police or the army themselves.

  總之，就身體、情感和社會(huì)而言，女性不適合在警察或軍隊(duì)服役。然而，這并不意味著婦女無須分擔(dān)保護(hù)國(guó)家的責(zé)任。作為“勞動(dòng)分工”理論的支持者，我認(rèn)為女性可以通過照顧他們的父母、孩子和家庭來幫助在警察和軍隊(duì)中服役的男性。這和她們自己在警察或軍隊(duì)中工作同等重要。

  解析

  (1)本段先總結(jié)前面的討論，同時(shí)對(duì)話題進(jìn)行一定程度的延伸：雖然女性不適合參軍或當(dāng)警察，但她們同樣可以為保護(hù)國(guó)家做出自己的貢獻(xiàn)。

  (2)This does not mean that... 這并不意味著......

  (3)Share of responsibility 責(zé)任分擔(dān)

  (4)Labor distribution 勞動(dòng)分工

  高分參考范文

  Just 100 years ago, policewomen or women soldiers were basically unheard of, yet now in many countries, women can be part of the police force and military force. Not afraid of the accusation of being biased against women or even male chauvinistic, I strongly believe that men and only men should be members of the police and military force.

  In the first place, being a policeman or soldier is extremely demanding physically. With very few exceptions, women are not possibly able to withstand the long hours of military training. For example, a policeman or a soldier sometimes has to remain exposed to the strong sunlight or the heavy storms hours after hours, or run many miles with heavy things carried with him. This means a soldier must possess great strength, stamina and endurance.While I am not willing to say that all women are lacking in these qualities, I am pretty sure that most women are not physically fit to do all this.

  Furthermore, if a woman plans to join the police or the army, she will have to deal with a number of social issues. For instance, her parents may have strong objections to this choice of hers, because with a daughter in the police or army, they may meet with inquiring and doubtful eye from their neighbors and friends. It was for this reason that my cousin sister had to give up her dream of becoming a soldier. Even if a woman does become part of the police or the army, she will have to learn to face a world full of the opposite sex. She may feel completely at odds with the rules and disciplines which are designed predominantly for men.

  To conclude, physically, emotionally, and socially speaking, women are not suitable to serve in the police or armed forces. However, this does not mean that women do not have their share of responsibility to protect their country. As a supporter of "labor distribution" theory, I think women can help the men serving in the police and the army by taking care of their parents, children, and the family. This is as important as working in the police or the army themselves.

  建議背誦的句子

  1. Not afraid of the accusation of being biased against women or even male chauvinistic, I strongly believe that men and only men should be members of the police and military force.

  不怕被指責(zé)我對(duì)女性抱有偏見或甚至是大男子主義，我強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)為，男子且只有男子才應(yīng)該是警察和軍事力量的成員。

  2. While I am not willing to say that all women are lacking in these qualities, I am pretty sure that most women are not physically fit to do all this.

  雖然我不愿意說所有的女性都缺乏這些素質(zhì)，但我很肯定大多數(shù)女性身體上都不適合做這些事情。

  3. Even if a woman does become part of the police or the army, she will have to learn to face a world full of the opposite sex. She may feel completely at odds with the rules and disciplines which are designed predominantly for men.

  即使一個(gè)女性成為警察或軍隊(duì)的一員，她也必須學(xué)會(huì)面對(duì)一個(gè)充滿異性的世界。她可能會(huì)覺得與那些主要是為男性而設(shè)計(jì)的規(guī)則和紀(jì)律格格不入。

  4. As a supporter of "labor distribution" theory, I think women can help the men serving in the police and the army by taking care of their parents, children, and the family.

  作為“勞動(dòng)分工”理論的支持者，我認(rèn)為女性可以通過照顧他們的父母、孩子和家庭來幫助在警察和軍隊(duì)中服役的男性。

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