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  雅思寫作大作文題目：

  In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes,what are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?

  參考范文及解析：

  本題涉及犯罪，重復的是2014年8月2日的考題，先要求考生分析原因，然后提出解決辦法。

  犯罪話題在雅思考試中出現比較頻繁，大家應該給予重視。近年來雅思考試中的“犯罪”話題主要集中在犯罪的原因，如何減少犯罪，懲罰罪犯的方法等。

  2013/11/9, 2015/4/25, 2017/5/6 ：Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (犯重罪的青年是否得到與成年人一樣的懲罰?)

  2014/11/8：Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Other believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(犯罪是由于環境所致，還是天性所致?)

  2015/8/8, 2018/7/28: Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree? (改造后的犯人是教育孩子的最佳人選嗎?)

  2018/3/3：In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with higher education so that they can not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (關于犯罪問題，監獄和教育哪個更有效?

  2018/11/3：It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (減少犯罪的最好方式是提高教育水平嗎?

  年輕人犯罪越來越多，原因何在?這里應結合當代社會給年輕人造成的影響來分析。比如，貧富差距的增大，單親家庭的增多，吸毒者越來越等，這些無疑都會導致年輕人犯罪率的提高。至于解決辦法，無非是教育改造和監獄兩種方法，可以認為應該結合這兩種辦法，或者取一種立場，認為教育比監獄更有效。

  老師筆記

  01

  Many countries are currently witnessing a rising criminal activity among people under the age of 18. There may be three reasons for this case, and the methods to punish children and teenagers should focus more on rehabilitation than prison.

  許多國家目前都出現了18歲以下人口犯罪活動的增加。這種情況可能有三個原因，懲罰兒童和青少年的方法應該是更多關注的是教化而不是監獄。

  解析

  (1)本段引出話題，明確即將分析三個原因，并提出自己關于如何懲罰青少年罪犯的觀點。

  (2)Currently 目前

  (3)Witness 見證;目睹

  (4)Rehabilitation 恢復;教化

  02

  Firstly, poverty could turn an immature child into a criminal. As the gap between the poor and the rich widens, young people may start looking for wrong ways to bridge the gap when they find their friends are richer. Secondly, with the number of broken families going up, more and more neglected children have trouble with the law, as the lack of love and affection from the family makes them angry and violent. As a result, their negative energy might find an outlet in committing crimes of all types. Finally, not only taking drugs is itself a crime but it may also lead to various other crimes that young people never intended to commit in the first place.

  首先，貧困會把一個不成熟的孩子變成罪犯。隨著貧富差距的增大，當年輕人發現他們的朋友更富有時，就可能會開始尋找錯誤的方法來彌補這一差距。第二，隨著破碎家庭數量的增加，越來越多的被忽視的孩子觸犯法律，因為缺乏家庭的愛和感情使他們很憤怒、很暴力。因此，他們的消極精力可能會在各種犯罪中找到出路。最后，吸毒本身不僅是一種犯罪，而且還可能導致各種年輕人本來并沒有打算犯的其他罪行。

  解析

  (1)Immature 不成熟的

  (2)Turn..into...將......變成......

  (3)The gap between the poor and the rich 貧富差距

  (4)Bridge the gap 彌補差距

  (5)To have trouble with the law 觸犯法律

  (6)Find an outlet in...在......找到出口

  (7)In the first place 首先;一開始

  03

  How should society punish young lawbreakers in order to prevent or reduce their criminal activity? On the one hand, severe punishment like locking up children in adult jails could have a deterrence effect by discouraging young criminals from committing new crimes. On the other hand, harsh punishments may have a negative impact on young offenders if they are incarcerated in the same way as adults. This could weaken young criminals’ already fragile links with society, nourish their negative interpersonal networking, and increase their likelihood of future criminal activity. Therefore, rehabilitation is probably a better answer than prison because it provides an environment that is more conductive to education.

  社會應如何懲罰年輕的違法者，以防止或減少他們的犯罪活動?一方面，嚴厲的懲罰，如將孩子關進成人監獄，可以阻止他們犯下新的罪行，從而產生威懾作用。另一方面，如果青少年罪犯與成年人一樣被監禁，嚴厲的懲罰可能會對他們產生負面影響。這可能削弱青少年罪犯與社會本已脆弱的聯系，滋養他們消極的人際網絡，增加他們今后犯罪活動的可能性。因此，教化可能是一個比監獄更好的答案，因為它提供了一個更有利于教育的環境。

  解析

  (1)lock up 關起來

  (2)Deterrence effect 威懾效果

  (3)Incarcerate 關押

  (4)Fragile 脆弱的

  (5)Nourish 滋養

  (6)Interpersonal networking 人際網絡

  (7)Likelihood 可能性

  (8)Be conductive to... 對......有益的

  范文

  Many countries are currently witnessing a rising criminal activity among people under the age of 18. There may be three reasons for this case, and the methods to punish children and teenagers should focus more on rehabilitation than prison.

  Firstly, poverty could turn an immature child into a criminal. As the gap between the poor and the rich widens, young people may start looking for wrong ways to bridge the gap when they find their friends are richer. Secondly, with the number of broken families going up, more and more neglected children have trouble with the law, as the lack of love and affection from the family makes them angry and violent. As a result, their negative energy might find an outlet in committing crimes of all types. Finally, not only taking drugs is itself a crime but it may also lead to various other crimes that young people never intended to commit in the first place.

  How should society punish young lawbreakers in order to prevent or reduce their criminal activity? On the one hand, severe punishment like locking up children in adult jails could have a deterrence effect by discouraging young criminals from committing new crimes. On the other hand, harsh punishments may have a negative impact on young offenders if they are incarcerated in the same way as adults. This could weaken young criminals’ already fragile links with society, nourish their negative interpersonal networking, and increase their likelihood of future criminal activity. Therefore, rehabilitation is probably a better answer than prison because it provides an environment that is more conductive to education.

  建議背誦的句子

  1. As the gap between the poor and the rich widens, young people may start looking for wrong ways to bridge the gap when they find their friends are richer.

  隨著貧富差距的增大，當年輕人發現他們的朋友更富有時，就可能會開始尋找錯誤的方法來彌補這一差距。

  2. Finally, not only taking drugs is itself a crime but it may also lead to various other crimes that young people never intended to commit in the first place.

  最后，吸毒本身不僅是一種犯罪，而且還可能導致各種年輕人本來并沒有打算犯的其他罪行。

  2. On the one hand, severe punishment like locking up children in adult jails could have a deterrence effect by discouraging young criminals from committing new crimes.

  一方面，嚴厲的懲罰，如將孩子關進成人監獄，可以阻止他們犯下新的罪行，從而產生威懾作用。

  3. Therefore, rehabilitation is probably a better answer than prison because it provides an environment that is more conductive to education.

  因此，教化可能是一個比監獄更好的答案，因為它提供了一個更有利于教育的環境

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