每場雅思考試之后，新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編會第一時間分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是8月17日雅思大作文范文及解析：父母應該允許孩子使用電子設備嗎。

  2019年8月17日雅思大作文題目：父母應該允許孩子使用電子設備嗎?

  More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

  解析&審題

  本題暗含了一個因果關系，即：因為使用電子設備可以幫助孩子學習使用新技術，所以父母允許孩子使用電子設備。對于這類因果關系的題目，我們可以有幾種思路，包括：

  1. 承認原因的合理性，也承認結果的合理性

  2. 承認原因的合理性，但否認結果，論證原因不一定導致結果

  3. 否認原因，承認結果，論證導致這個結果另有其因

  4. 否認原因，否認結果

  在實際寫作中，一般的做法都是先承認原因，然后批判論證這個原因與結果之間的邏輯關系。

  就本題而言，我們可以先承認，應該讓孩子們使用電子設備以幫助他們學習新技術(論述學習新技術的重要性)，然后開始反轉，論述這并不意味著要允許孩子過度使用電子設備(因為這樣會從身心兩個方面對孩子產生不良影響)。

  以下請看唐老師的高分范文。

  老師筆記

  01

  Parents often struggle with decisions which involve their children’s technology access. While children must learn technology skills from playing on computers and tablets, there are potential risks to consider.

  家長們經常為關于孩子們使用新技術的決定而苦惱。雖然孩子們必須從電腦和平板電腦上學習技術技能，但也有潛在的風險需要考慮。

  解析

  (1) 本段直接引出孩子們使用新技術的話題，然后提出自己的觀點：孩子們應該通過使用電子設備來學習新技術，但也要考慮其中的風險。

  (2) Struggle with… 為……而掙扎，為……而苦惱

  (3) Access 使用;進入

  (4) Potential risks 潛在的風險

  02

  Learning technology skills can benefit children for a variety of reasons. Firstly, exposing children to technology concepts early on prepares them for a future where they can remain productive, as more and more things will go online. Without adequate technology skills, children could hardly survive in the future world. Secondly, technology provides a source of educational entertainment for children playing on computers and tablets. E-learning has become so popular these days that it has become a very important part of children’s education. Finally, through technology, children have means to broaden their horizons like never before. For these reasons and more, parents are increasingly allowing their children to play on computers and tablets.

  學習技術技能可以使兒童受益，原因有很多。首先，讓孩子們盡早接觸到技術概念，為他們的未來做好準備，這樣他們就可以保持活力，因為越來越多的事情將在網上進行。如果沒有足夠的技術技能，兒童很難在未來的世界中生存。其次，科技為在電腦和平板電腦上玩耍的孩子們提供了教育娛樂的來源。電子學習近年來非常流行，已成為兒童教育的重要組成部分。最后，通過科技，孩子們有了前所未有的開闊視野的方法。出于這些原因，越來越多的家長允許他們的孩子玩電腦和平板電腦。

  解析

  (1) 本段論述應該讓孩子們通過電子設備來學習新技術，因為新技術對于孩子們很重要：一、新技術讓孩子們為未來做好準備;二、新技術可以幫助孩子們學習;三、新技術可以拓展孩子們的視野。

  (2) A variety of… 多種多樣的

  (3) Expose…to… 把……暴露在……之下

  (4) Early on 盡早地

  (5) Productive 有生產力的;有活力的

  (6) Adequate 足夠的

  (7) Broaden one’s horizons 開闊視野

  03

  However, over-using technology has a negative impact on children, both physically and mentally. For one thing, although playing on computers and tablets may promote new learning opportunities, it may also encourage less physical movement or a sedentary lifestyle. This can be seen in the rising number of children who have trouble with obesity. It is because spending too much time indoors in front of a screen increases the risk of weight gain. Mentally speaking, children who have more screen time are likely to have difficulty forming friendships and productive social networking. In their imagination, the world is shrinking as they begin to stop engaging in real-life, preferring the fantasy world offered by technology instead.

  然而，過度使用技術對孩子的身心都有負面影響。一方面，雖然在電腦和平板電腦上玩可能會促進新的學習機會，但它也可能鼓勵較少的身體運動或久坐的生活方式。這可以從越來越多的有肥胖問題的兒童中得到證明，這是因為在室內屏幕前呆太久會提高體重增加的風險。從心理上講，有更多屏幕時間的孩子很可能難以建立友誼和有效的社交網絡。當他們開始停止融入現實生活時，在他們的想象中，世界正在縮小，轉而更喜歡技術提供的幻想世界。

  解析

  (1) 本段討論過度使用電子產品對孩子的負面影響：身體方面和心理方面。

  (2) A negative impact on… 對……的負面影響

  (3) For one thing 其一

  (4) A sedentary lifestyle 久坐的生活方式

  (5) The rising number of… 越來越多的……

  (6) Obesity 肥胖(癥)

  (7) To have difficulty doing… 做……有困難

  (8) Engage in 從事;融入

  (9) Fantasy world 幻想世界

  04

  In conclusion, the pros and cons of children using technology must all come down to moderation. Parents should realize that, for all the advantages, technological devices like computers and tablets can be harmful if they are overused.

  總之，支持和反對孩子使用技術都必須適度。家長們應該意識到，盡管有很多優點，但電腦和平板電腦等技術設備如果過度使用，可能會造成危害。

  解析

  (1) 總結前文的主要觀點，并提出自己的看法。

  (2) Pros and cons 支持和反對

  (3) Come down to moderation 走向適中

  (4) For all the advantages盡管有這些優點

  高分范文參考：

  Parents often struggle with decisions which involve their children’s technology access. While children must learn technology skills from playing on computers and tablets, there are potential risks to consider.

  Learning technology skills can benefit children for a variety of reasons. Firstly, exposing children to technology concepts early on prepares them for a future where they can remain productive, as more and more things will go online. Without adequate technology skills, children could hardly survive in the future world. Secondly, technology provides a source of educational entertainment for children playing on computers and tablets. E-learning has become so popular these days that it has become a very important part of children’s education. Finally, through technology, children have means to broaden their horizons like never before. For these reasons and more, parents are increasingly allowing their children to play on computers and tablets.

  However, over-using technology has a negative impact on children, both physically and mentally. For one thing, although playing on computers and tablets may promote new learning opportunities, it may also encourage less physical movement or a sedentary lifestyle. This can be seen in the rising number of children who have trouble with obesity. It is because spending too much time indoors in front of a screen increases the risk of weight gain. Mentally speaking, children who have more screen time are likely to have difficulty forming friendships and productive social networking. In their imagination, the world is shrinking as they begin to stop engaging in real-life, preferring the fantasy world offered by technology instead.

  In conclusion, the pros and cons of children using technology must all come down to moderation. Parents should realize that, for all the advantages, technological devices like computers and tablets can be harmful if they are overused.

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  建議背誦的句子

  1. Firstly, exposing children to technology concepts early on prepares them for a future where they can remain productive, as more and more things will go online

  首先，讓孩子們盡早接觸到技術概念，為他們的未來做好準備，這樣他們就可以保持活力，因為越來越多的事情將在網上進行。

  2. E-learning has become so popular these days that it has become a very important part of children’s education.

  電子學習近年來非常流行，已成為兒童教育的重要組成部分。

  3. For one thing, although playing on computers and tablets may promote new learning opportunities, it may also encourage less physical movement or a sedentary lifestyle.

  一方面，雖然在電腦和平板電腦上玩可能會促進新的學習機會，但它也可能鼓勵較少的身體運動或久坐的生活方式。

  4. Mentally speaking, children who have more screen time are likely to have difficulty forming friendships and productive social networking.

  從心理上講，有更多屏幕時間的孩子很可能難以建立友誼和有效的社交網絡。

  5. Parents should realize that, for all the advantages, technological devices like computers and tablets can be harmful if they are overused.

  家長們應該意識到，盡管有很多優點，但電腦和平板電腦等技術設備如果過度使用，可能會造成危害。