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2021年4月3日雅思大作文范文及解析：從網上看新聞是件好事嗎?
2021/4/7 10:47:05來源：新航道作者：新航道
摘要：新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年4月3日雅思大作文范文及解析：從網上看新聞是件好事嗎?
新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年4月3日雅思大作文范文及解析：從網上看新聞是件好事嗎?
2021年4月3日雅思大作文題目
More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
高分范文及解析
01
With news online dispersing like wildfire [獨立主格作狀語], the heyday of the newspaper industry and television news programs has gone. I tend to think this trend irresistible and positive [表態]. This [邏輯銜接]is partly because the Internet — a vast storehouse of digital information — is convenient for people to dig for previous news, whereas [對比] neither the printed paper material nor the TV programs are easy to preserve for information searching.
解析
?在第一段表態(positive)
?并點出第一點積極之處(信息量大，方便讀者搜索以往新聞)
02
The mass quantity of news online[邏輯銜接] also benefits from its fast update speed. This [邏輯銜接] edge allows netizens to obtain any story from the blog of a witness the second it happens, which is remarkable and more importantly, life-saving when disasters happen. Newspapers and TV programs on the other hand [邏輯銜接] need time for editing, censoring, printing, and delivering, extending people’s access to news about the world to at least the next day.
解析
? 第二段繼續點出積極之處(更新速度快，讀者能迅速獲取新聞)
03
Despite these [邏輯銜接], news online is still portable, with palm-sized technological gadgets only. Typically, for people in a hurry in the morning, convenience and mobility are always preferred, and this is why [邏輯銜接] they would like to browse breaking news from a handhold phone on the subway rather than spend minutes in front of the TV or carry a thick stack of paper materials out.
解析
? 乘勝追擊，再點積極之處(便攜)
04
However[邏輯銜接], the demerits of accessing e-news cannot be denied. To get more traffic, some news editors no longer interview in person but fabricate, releasing inauthentic news online. Consuming such information [邏輯銜接], the public is hard not to be misled.
解析
?轉而寫一點消極之處(魚龍混雜，易被誤導)
05
In conclusion, I think the growth of online newspaper is positive. The main point is that government should superintend the released information and news writers should have a fact-finding attitude.
解析
? 最后一段不僅是總結上文，還給出了在此基礎上的一些合理建議。
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