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7月15日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 工作生活難平衡的原因和解決方法

2024/3/29 15:18:54來源：新航道作者：新航道

摘要：7月15日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 工作生活難平衡的原因和解決方法

7月15日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 工作生活難平衡的原因和解決方法



每場雅思考試之后，第一時間分享本場考試雅思A類大作文的范文權威解析。歡迎每周鎖定。

 2023年7月15日雅思大作文題目  
Many people aim to achieve the balance between their work and life, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it? (2023/07/15)

 范文及解析 
Introduction
Over  the past decades, to balance work and life has long been a hard nut to crack for working individuals. Behind such a puzzle, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert such a bleak future.

 解 析 
本次考題重復2019年7月20日考題，整體難度不大;話題是工作與生活相結合；
? a hard nut to crack一個難解決的問題

Body 1
The financial pressure would be the chief culprit for the majority failing to achieve work-life balance. We are living in a consumer society where money is a massive preoccupation. Many individuals, accordingly, are swamped with a multitude of tasks, most of which are inextricably bound up with money, be they mortgage, private cars, or tuition fees for children. Therefore, it is no surprise to find most youngsters, breadwinners in the family, are struggling to pay all the bills. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the corporate culture in contemporary society. In today’s world, working hours have been held up as the key to evaluate the contribution employees make in their positions, which means the longer officers are on duty, the more employable and competent they are. Consequently, a mushrooming number of employees, aiming to be a star performer rather than a whiner in their boss’s eyes, are apt to trap themselves in the office, leading to the inequality between their work and private life.

 解 析 
工作生活難平衡的原因：
1)經濟壓力大；社會以消費為主導，人們忙于賺錢，支付各種賬單；
2)工作市場中企業(yè)文化；企業(yè)往往把工作時長跟員工的貢獻度相對等，雇主會認為員工工作時間越長，他們越值得被雇傭；

? culprit n. 問題的起因;
? preoccupation n.使人全神貫注的事物，使人入神的事物; 
? be swamped with v. 忙得不可開交；
? inextricably adv.不可避免地；
? mushrooming adj.越來越多的；
? whiner n.哀訴者；

Body 2
Prickly as the issue is, measures can be implemented to address it. Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe punishment such as stiff fine toward the exploitation of labor, which are expected to prohibit long working hours，safeguarding the rights and interests of workers. Another feasible prescription is to initiate the policy of tax reduction to those with living odds and tight budget, with which they are less likely to toil away, sweating their guts out. Apart from punishment and fiscal policy from the government, dissemination of information concerning the significance of achieving work-life balance plays its own part. Individuals are supposed to boost their working efficiency and productivity and manage the time reasonably, spending more time with family members and keeping away from the electronics.

 解 析 
解決方法：
1)政府嚴格立法保障勞動者合法權益；
2)政府調整稅收政策減少中低收入人群經濟負擔；
3)個人需要提高工作效率，花更多時間去陪伴家人；

? enact v.制定，通過，頒布（法令）；
? prescription n.處方，藥方；
? living odds n.生活困難;
? toil away v.埋頭苦干；為生計奔波；
? sweating their guts out v.汗流浹背；

Conclusion
In conclusion, causes for the blur between work and family life range from financial pressure to transformed enterprise culture and the negative impacts for such a worrying trend are too serious to be neglected. Joint efforts from the government and media are required if we are to bring this ticklish problem under control.

 解 析 
? blur n.模糊不清的事物；
? ticklish adj.不安定的，不穩(wěn)定的；難對付的；
總結前文。

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