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  劍5Test4雅思寫作Task2大作文題目：

  Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on your personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

  Which do you consider to be the major influence?

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  劍5Test2雅思寫作Task2大作文范文：

  Nowadays, according to mental and psychologic science, our personality inherited more characteristics we are born than any other experiences in our life. Many genetic technology can also prove this argument. However, others think what we experience in the life can make more influences on our mind. For my part, I could hardly support the later one.

  As we known, the personality which we owned when we was born cannot be deleted and forgotten. Just like IQ, even though the brain exercise can raise IQ a little, but it cannot change a lot. Consequently,we can explain our characteristics in the same way. Some experts' researches showed that most of our mental features form base on our born personality. So, even we may experience something in our rest life, it cannot change our characteristics a lot.

  Some people who against it may advocate that we can always hear the storis just like: someone who was a bad boy before, however, an events happened to him and changed his spirits. Didn't the above theory cannot explain it? No! Though events can let your life aim turn around, however, the fundamental personality in your deep mind still like before! The events just let you know what you should do, but not force to change your characteristics!

  In a conclusion, we know the born characteristic is the major influence in our personality. All changes which happen in our rest of life is just a factor to change it little, but not the absolute factor.

  劍5Test2雅思寫作Task2大作文范文(二)：

  Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual’s personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).

  Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual’s life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.

  My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life. Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. It is the interacting of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born.

  In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.

  大漠點評：

  開頭段：

  Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences.

  談背景，這種稱為作者與讀者之間尋找共同點(common grounds),也就是為了發(fā)展文章，作者希望能將讀者獲得同樣一個起點，這樣就能促進理解。

  We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual’s personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).

  We are unable to decide 獲得了具體的背景知識，但這并不是作者個人的觀點，注意人稱we，但是從這里就奠定了文章的基調(diào)。

  than ever before 這時比較句型中兩事物前后時間特征的比較，用得很廣泛

  genetic factors，the environment 題目用詞;

  nature , nurture 雜志報紙普遍用詞,通過這種手段將題目與大眾聯(lián)系起來，高，實在是高

  主體一段：

  Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual’s life.

  遺傳重要

  作者背景知識很不錯，聯(lián)系到了醫(yī)學(xué)當(dāng)中的雙生子研究(twin study),也就是identical twins的研究，用研究結(jié)果來說明問題實際也是舉例子的形式

  highlight [vt] 強調(diào)，這個詞經(jīng)常用到

  But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development.

  遺傳不一定重要

  but引導(dǎo)了，whether… depends on whether…，這是句復(fù)雜句型，很對稱很美觀

  “遺傳特質(zhì)是否在個人性格中發(fā)展取決于環(huán)境是否允許其發(fā)展”很科學(xué)的表述

  It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.

  環(huán)境重要

  It seems that接so…that的因果句型

  plenty of research finding句末還不忘提出“有科學(xué)依據(jù)”

  主體二段

  My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life. Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting.

  一個my own view作標志引出了作者的觀點interact ，作者觀點標志詞很重要

  no one influence (代表沒有) instead (而是，代表替代觀點)

  It is the interacting of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops.

  It is…that 的強調(diào)句型

  shape，dictate [vt] 決定， 注意同義表達

  If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born.

  還不過癮，用否定虛擬語氣來進一步強調(diào)

  結(jié)尾段

  In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects.

  In conclusion, I think再次總結(jié)強調(diào)自己的觀點

  How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.

  這個稱為“擴展”，雖然確定了因素之間的關(guān)系是“相互影響”，擴展一下，“到達如何影響不知道”，是話題的進一步延伸

  還原作者寫作流程：

  審題：

  nature or nurture 老調(diào)重彈，不過這這個話題沒別的：中立。中立的主體段應(yīng)該雙方觀點+我的觀點

  框架：

  開頭段：這是個很科學(xué)的話題，所以開頭就應(yīng)當(dāng)把science這個東西提出來，說genetic science遺傳學(xué)很火，遺傳學(xué)也確實解釋了一些東西，不過nature or nature這個問題確實沒有解決。

  主體一段：這次把正反兩個方面都介紹一些吧，就三句話：遺傳重要，遺傳不一定重要，環(huán)境很重要。

  主體二段：擺擺我的看法，交互(interact),再解釋強調(diào)一下：這種交互作用決定這我們，如果不是交互作用(也就是只是遺傳決定)，那么就是“龍生龍，鳳生鳳，老鼠生子打地洞了”。

  首位段：總結(jié)+展望：環(huán)境和遺傳都很重要，而且如何交換咱不知道(不說最后這句也不會死人啊)。

  遣詞造句：

  遺傳的：inherited characteristics;genetic factor;nature

  環(huán)境的：environment;nurture; situations and experiences

  人的：human psychology ;mental development ;personality; behavior; character; Traits

  作者運用了it is… that強調(diào)句和虛擬語氣表強調(diào)，注意一下

  如果是我?

  作者有一些背景知識，但是他還是非專業(yè)人士，準確說研究環(huán)境對人發(fā)展影響的是心理學(xué)家們，尤其是以華生為代表的行為主義者;醫(yī)學(xué)家，尤其是遺傳流行病學(xué)專家做遺傳對人發(fā)展的影響。有點扯遠了，這個話題就是騎墻，觀點就是相互影響(interact),專業(yè)術(shù)語叫“交互”。作者遣詞造句的能力實在是望塵莫及，我還是老一套吧，發(fā)揮我的專業(yè)特長外加細化能力，要我寫就這要吧：

  第一段， 老一套+本人的專業(yè)知識：這個話題很熱，遺傳學(xué)家和行為心理學(xué)家都很賣力，提出有相互沖突的說法。

  第二段， 支持遺傳學(xué)的，人很多方面受遺傳控制，不但是身高膚色等，性格和發(fā)展也是說遺傳制約的，這些特征也就造就了社會的多樣性。再細化一下，如有的人天生內(nèi)向，往往這種人也勤于思考，那么他發(fā)展這些特點，也影響的職業(yè)發(fā)展，如做科研等，有些人天性外向，傾向于社交，喜歡做銷售等。

  第三段， 支持后天決定論的，環(huán)境對人有很大作用，雙生子研究做過一些特別的證明就是把一個同卵雙生(也就是遺傳特質(zhì)完全一致)，然后由于某種原因分開，性格和發(fā)展相差很大。

  第四段， 我的觀點，相互影響，某種性格特質(zhì)傾向于選擇某種適合這種特質(zhì)發(fā)展的環(huán)境(一個外向的人喜歡party; 某些環(huán)境也會改變?nèi)说奶刭|(zhì)(如心理咨詢治療等)

  第五段， 總結(jié)一下

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