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新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年2月6日雅思大作文范文及解析:出國變得越來越簡單,是好事還是壞事?
2021年2月6日雅思大作文題目
It has become easier and more affordable for people to visit other countries.
Is it a positive or negative development?
高分范文及解析
01
Visiting other countries is fantastic and favorable. The visit, gratifyingly, has become more easier for people, whether it is because of the simplified procedures like the visa-free scheme or the lower expense.
解析
開篇通過數個正面評價詞匯體現作者本身的? 立場:贊同積極
fantastic 極好的
favorable 有利的
gratifyingly 令人欣喜地
02
[概括觀點] Being dropped into a new country can expand the visitor’s perspective.[解釋觀點] Suddenly, one has to order meals in a new language, navigate unfamiliar places, and cope with unexpected dilemma, through which he could realize how resourceful and capable he could be. Educational as these unforgettable novelties are, they, different from what the visitors have known, could also teach them to be tolerant, appreciating these differences. [概括觀點] For the destination, the more outboard visitors, the better preservation of its culture. [解釋觀點] To specify, having plumbed that people come for new things, local government would try its best to prevent culture from fading away. This way, cultural diversity is guaranteed.
解析
貼緊開篇的積極立場開始闡述存在的好處
navigate 導航
resourceful 足智多謀的
capable 有能力的
novelty 新奇的事物
plumb 探出
fade away 消失
03
[適度的轉折]Indeed, this is not the whole story.[解釋觀點]A deluge of visitors can be devastating to local environment, as they may litter everywhere and mark the facilities. [舉例證實] As a matter of fact, even the relatively most inaccessible scenic spots, the Mount Everest, for example, have not escaped human-generated waste. [對應著駁倒] However, I personally think such an ongoing plight can and is being changed, thanks to the booming tourism. [解釋理由] This is because more and more authorities have realized that the sustainable tourism hinges largely on a neat and tidy environment, so how could anyone of them fail to clean the garbage-engulfed corners and repair damaged facilities?
解析
不忘去一分為二地看待問題
this is not the whole story 這不是全貌
litter 扔垃圾
mark 作記號
a deluge of 洪水般涌來的
devastating 破壞性極強的
ongoing plight 糟糕狀況
hinge on 取決于
engulf 吞沒
04
In conclusion, when people can tour other countries more easily and affordably, the long-lasting benefits to both individuals and destinations far outweigh the underlying demerits. To support the development, all we visitors need to do is to be a sustainable visitor, protecting local environment while enjoying the fine view and impressive culture.
解析
解析:簡潔地總結上文
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