新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年12月30日雅思大作文范文及解析：網絡可以取代學校嗎?

  2021年12月30日雅思大作文題目

  Since people can study through the internet, schools have become unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  To secure as many learning materials as possible, some deem that brick-and-mortar schools are no longer necessary since internet has well performed this task. However, I tend to think otherwise, since people engaged in distance learning may risk losing some other essential things that in-person experience can offer.

  解析

  老話題：有了網絡，啥都能被取代?今年6月剛考過一場類似話題：Some people think travelling abroad is necessary, while others think that is not necessary because TV and the internet can give the same information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

   secure vt. 獲得

   brick-and-mortar adj. 實體的

   risk doing…. 冒險做…

   in-person adj. 親身的

  Body 1

  Perceivably the biggest advantage of the use of the latest technology in education is the flexibility it offers. It is now no longer essential for students to be present in the classroom for their courses. By simply clicking a mouse, they can easily access either some websites that feature renowned teachers and professors or some links to online lectures and seminars, whether domestic or overseas, without stepping a foot into a school. Besides, the distance learning facility also enables employed professionals, housewives and people from different countries to enrol and successfully finish useful courses offered by numerous institutes, regardless of the geographic distance. More importantly, COVID-19 pandemic has specifically taught us how this flexibility even could be a lifesaver. // However, this never means that schools are no longer necessary.

  解析

  讓步-internet的好處：老生常談了，突破空間的限制，尤其在新冠疫情當下，更是成為救星。

   access v. 獲取

   feature v. 以…為特征

   lifesaver n. 救命的人[物]

  Body 2

  In effect, there are many fundamental reasons why students will be better off attending offline lessons. To start, distance learning may reduce students’ efficiency and productivity. When studying in schools, students will be motivated by both strict supervision from teachers and pressure from their counterparts. Meanwhile, teachers can better observe whether students have assimilated the knowledge so as to adjust teaching materials and progresses promptly. By stark contrast, students, especially those who lack self-discipline and easily get indulged in cosy environments, will be less efficient and productive. // Another reason is that remote learning deprives students of face-to-face interaction with classmates and teachers, which, in the long term, will render their people skills withering away.

  解析

  線下課堂不可取代的原因：1. 老師監督+同齡人壓力=動力，并且老師可以及時觀察到學生的接收狀態，從而調整上課進程;2. 長期缺乏面對面交流，導致溝通能力下降

   be better off doing sth. 最好做某事

   counterpart n. 對應的人(物)

   assimilate vt. 吸收

   get indulged in 沉溺于

   deprive sb. of sth. 剝奪某人某物

   wither away 變弱;消逝

  Conclusion

  To recapitulate, though flexibility, be it spatially or temporally, can be offered by the internet, complete reliance on it may render students neither efficient nor productive.

  解析

  重申觀點

   recapitulate v. 總結