2022/1/5 15:35:31來源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目,也是難以提高的科目。新航道章躍老師分享小作文的地圖3:“上帝”視角看計劃性改變,希望能對即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!
雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目,也是難以提高的科目。新航道章躍老師分享小作文的地圖3:“上帝”視角看計劃性改變,希望能對即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!
【類型】地圖(非數據型圖表)
【細分】改建(removal、replacements、additions)
【寫作視角】“上帝視角”。注意:題圖題的主體部分有三種視角(對應三種寫作思路):1)上帝視角(即俯視,當成平面圖寫);2)訪客視角(即進入建筑或場地內部,以訪客視線,按照線路圖寫);3)混合視角(即前兩種視角混合著用)。老章不常用純粹的上帝視角寫,這一篇從而值得注意學習這種視角的寫法。
# Introduction
The two maps depict the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions. With replacements and additions, this facility will have greater versatility.
開頭段,固定操作。說明圖的主題,以及描述變化后的突出特點。
# Body
The entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded with a sports shop and a café in the west and east corners, while the central area of the premises will not change much, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating zone will remain the way they are.
主體部分第一段:按照圖中箭頭的指向,先描述一進門的區域的變化,從變化最大的部分開始,進而寫到變化小或者沒有變化的部分。
Immense changes will be made on the outdoor courts, which are now independent of the central area. The west court will be removed, and as its replacement, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be replaced, and there will be a number of facilities where it is: the first is a sizeable sports hall that will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool; the second is a pair of dance studios that will be located directly opposite the sports hall; in addition, a changing room – adjacent to the café –will be built in the southeast corner.
主體部分第二段:視線轉向至東西方向的區域。與上一段的思路相同,先寫變化大的地方后寫變化小的地方。注意:需要通過一些連接詞向考官展示寫作的邏輯順序。
# Conclusion
With the planned changes, the sports center will be more multi-functional.
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