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摘要:新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年3月12日雅思大作文范文及解析:我們的生活更好嘛?
新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年3月12日雅思大作文范文及解析:我們的生活更好嘛?
2022年3月12日雅思大作文題目
People living in the twenty-first century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
高分范文及解析
Introduction
In the past century, human society has achievedunprecedented technological progresses, by which, from my perspective, the standard of living for average persons has been greatlybettered.
解析
這題的寫作范圍比較大,相對而言給大家降低了跑題的風險,只要大家以“今昔對比”去寫,語法細節上注意描寫過去的情況時,用一般過去時。“今昔對比”的題上,其實內核還是萬變不離其中,也是最近出題的話題核心——科技。
unprecedented adj. 空前的
better vt. 改善,改進
Body 1
Admittedly, technological advancement hasposed a threat to human’s well-being to some extent. To illustrate, people, especially young children and teenagers, nowadays easilyget indulged in or evenaddicted to hi-tech gadgets, spending hours playing video games and using social media, while they usuallyneglect their real life and thus lack face-to-face interaction with their families and friends. This, in the long term, may incur feelings of loneliness and isolation. More accurately, those people are basing their sense ofself-esteem on the number of ‘hearts’ and followers, and once the count is below their expectation, they may feelfrustrated or even have a negative view on themselves. Meanwhile,collapsing in front of the screen all day with snacks in hand, people nowadays are more likely to suffer from declining level of health, such ascorpulenceor obesity, while people in the past, without such siren calls, allocated more time to accompanying their beloved ones andsmelling the roses.
解析
讓步+反駁:沉迷網絡,給身心帶來消極影響
pose a threat to v. 造成威脅
get indulged in v. 沉溺于
get addicted to v. 上癮于
neglect vt. 忽視
self-esteem n. 自尊心
frustrated adj. 沮喪的
collapse vi. 癱坐
corpulence n. 臃腫
smell the roses 親近自然
Body 2
However, the aforementioned demerits can actually be avoided as long as people havefostered the sense ofself-discipline, which indicates that behind today’s life is asilver lining. In effect, the cutting-edge technology has enabled netizens to not only spice up their social life through speedy interaction among other cyber users but also facilitate cultural, business and academic exchanges through sundry online platforms, regardless of geographic distance or accidents and incidents popping up in the real life. A typical example is that international students can attend the online courses offered by world-renowned universities without stepping in the campus thousands of miles away and concerning about thegravity of pandemics. Besides, video game producers have also developed new products regardingintellectual progresses and physical fitness. Moreover, medical and biological breakthroughs have cured more diseases, improved the patients’ quality of life, and increased life expectancy. All of those cannot be imagined by people living in previous centuries.
解析
立論:和上段對應,一一反駁,同時帶過其他方面的好處
foster vt. 培養
self-discipline n. 自律
silver lining n. 一線希望
spice up v. 增添趣味
sundry adj. 各種各樣的
gravity n. [局勢]嚴重性
intellectual progress n. 智力發展
Conclusion
In a nutshell, people nowadays do enjoy a more convenient and comfortable life than those in the past did owing to the astonishing technological advances.
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