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摘要:新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年5月12日雅思大作文范文及解析:電子版VS實體。
新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年5月12日雅思大作文范文及解析:電子版VS實體。
2022年5月12日雅思大作文題目
Some people believe using modern technology (digital photographs, blogs) is the best way to record and remember important personal events. Others think the traditional method (making photo albums, writing diaries) is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Introduction
With technologies progressing unprecedentedly, some prefer to adopt modern ways to capture the critical moments, while others remain utilising the traditional methods. Personally, the key to this debate lies in how people define the significance of those records.
解析
雖然是新題,但仍屬于“科技”話題,內核不變。best極端詞本題可忽略,討論兩者哪個更好。
unprecedentedly adv. 空前地
capture vt. 〔用文字或圖片〕記錄下,描述,捕捉
Body 1
The digital version does have its edges especially for those users who desire to share memories with others. This is mainly because modern technology has brought much convenience to satisfy their demands. Taking full advantage of the colossal storage capacity and the fast travelling speed on the Internet, netizens can not only recall their memories whenever they want but also share their digital albums and blogs on social media, which facilitates them to win a large number of ‘hearts’ and followers and thus enhance their sense of self-esteem. While some may be concerned about the risks of privacy leakages, such problems can be avoided via setting access codes. In contrast, traditional ways, in terms of sharing, are largely restrained by the geographic distance.
解析
電子版的好處:對于有分享欲的人而言,電子版的便于存儲與分享,更能滿足他們的需求 [對比論證] 紙質版相對不便利
colossal adj. 巨大的
capacity n. 容量,容積;容納能力
facilitate vt. 促進;使便利
self-esteem n. 自尊心
leakage n. 泄露
access n.[U] 進入權;使用權;接觸的機會
Body 2
However, for those who do not base their expectation on the click-through rate, traditional methods like making photo albums and writing diaries lock up more significance. To illustrate, since those items are made in person, they are equipped with personal characteristics. Either the layout of photos or the style of writing gives life to the records, which can further evoke strong memories of the moments captured. The more photos and paper have yellowed with ages, the more precious the memories have been. It is worth memorising that one, in his or her late years, flicks through the albums and tells the beloved ones about the stories recorded. However, the digital version only has the date shown on the screen to tell how many years have passed.
解析
傳統方式的好處:具有個人特色,有觸感,激發制作過程的回憶 [對比論證] 電子版看不到時間的流逝,難體會回憶的珍貴
click-through rate n. 點擊率
in person adv. 親自
evoke vt. 引起,喚起〔強烈的感情或回憶〕
capture vt. 捕捉
yellow vi./vt. (使)變黃,(使)發黃
flick through vi. 快速地瀏覽〔書、雜志、照片等〕
Conclusion
In a nutshell, both methods have their pros and cons, and the answer of the discussion largely depends on personal interests.
解析
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