新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年6月11日雅思大作文范文及解析：老人壽命更長帶來的問題及解決辦法?

  2022年6月11日雅思大作文題目

  Today people live longer after retiring from work.What problems does this cause for individuals and society? What can be done to address these problems?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  It is now a commonplace that we,when stepping into a hospital or a public park,can see a lot more elderly people than we used to do,as people nowadays have longer life expectancies with medical services and living conditions progressing.Personally,this may incur several repercussions on both individuals and society as a whole,and this thorny issue can be resolved promisingly.

  解析

  說明文題型，問結果和解決辦法。人口老齡化話題。注意：后果只能寫負面影響，且必須[個人]和[社會]兩個層面均覆蓋。

  step into v. 踏入

  life expectancy n.[C] 平均壽命

  incur vt. 招致(常做貶義)

  repercussion n.[C] (常做復數)〔尤指不好的〕持續影響，反響，后果

  thorny adj. 棘手的

  promisingly adv. 有希望地

  Effects

  To commence, retirees may suffer from pains both physically and psychologically.Advanced though current health care is,it can only guarantee the longevity of humans,and pensioners who are at their eighties and nineties may still undergo pains brought by various diseases,such as heart diseases,strokes,and damaged joints.Besides,as most of their children are wrapped up in their work, the senior left at home alone are very likely to lack companionship and suffer from empty-nest syndrome.Meanwhile,some elderly people may also feel a sense of frustration that they can do little for their children and society owing to less energy they have, and even feel abandoned by society as the technology is progressing so fast that they fail to adapt to such a fast-paced life. // On the social level, the government ought to allocate more budgets to pensions and other welfare services like hospitals and nursing homes for the sake of ensuring retirees’ wellbeing, which indicates a heavier financial burden on society.

  解析

  個人問題：1. 生理病痛折磨：如心臟疾病、中風、關節疼痛等;2. 心理問題：感覺自己無用，是累贅，或是空巢老人覺得孤獨，感覺被子女和時代所拋下;社會問題：更多養老金和福利設施，意味著更多的經濟負擔。

  retiree n.[C] 退休者

  longevity n.[U] 壽命

  pensioner n.[C] 退休者

  stroke n.[C] 中風

  joint n.[C] 關節

  be wrapped up in sth. 忙于…(以致于沒有精力關注其他事情)

  empty-nest syndrome n. 空巢綜合征

  ? frustration n. 沮喪

  ? abandon vt. 拋棄

  Solutions

  Given the gravity of these problems, two schemes can be put on the agenda. The first imperative approach is that the government can issue corresponding policies, such as raising the age of retirement, or encourage companies to reemploy those experienced senior workers. Taking full advantage of their abundant experience in certain workplace, the elderly can help to train new employees who lack relevant experience, which not only give the old a sense of fulfilment but also alleviate the financial burden of the government to some extent. Additionally, communities can arrange a variety of activities for the senior community members. For instance, easy tasks like putting up notices can be assigned, which will make the old feel that they can still make contributions to the community. Meanwhile, the retirees can also be called on to participate in the activities where they can chat freely with other peers, thus making them feel less lonely.

  解析

  解決辦法：1. 政府：頒布政策，如：提高退休年齡或鼓勵返聘退休人員，使有能力的退休者依舊可以憑借自己的經驗在工作領域發光發熱，同時也能緩解勞動力不足帶來的經濟問題;2. 社區：舉辦各種活動，比如：布置一些簡單的任務，使老人覺得自己還能給社區做貢獻;或者提供平臺讓老人們聚在一起，不再感到孤獨。

  imperative adj. 迫切的

  Conclusion

  To recapitulate, since possible effects and feasible remedies have been enumerated, this crisis can be handled with joint efforts of both the government and communities.

  解析

  重申觀點

  recapitulate v. 總結

  remedy n.[C] 消除辦法

  enumerate vt. 列舉

  joint effort n.[C] 通力合作