新航道雅思小編之前分享了新航道老師帶來(lái)的3分鐘學(xué)會(huì)一個(gè)雅思7分句系列，今天繼續(xù)分享這個(gè)系列的句式之3分鐘學(xué)會(huì)一個(gè)雅思7分句系列(73)，成功就是日復(fù)一日那一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)小小努力的積累。

  In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, like clothing and medicines.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  【段落示范】(主體部分第一段)

  1. Today, humans have already found or created a great variety of substitutes for animals’ furs.

  2. Those materials can also make good clothes, and some materials are even more comfortable, functional, or durable.

  3. For example, some fabrics can produce lightweight jackets that are as wind resistant and warm keeping as those made from furs.

  4. There may be better features: they may be waterproof or hard to be ripped.

  5. In addition, for people who need expensive furs to display their wealth or to tickle their vanity, more and more manufacturers are changing this mindset.

  6. They have been joining the campaign for using alternative leather, which is also rare and requires delicate craftsmanship in production.

  【解析】

  一、內(nèi)容維度(TR)：*** 特別重要 ***

  * 第1句和第2句組合起來(lái)，是整個(gè)段落的“中心思想”。核心內(nèi)容在于“a great variety of substitutes”以及“make good clothes … even more comfortable, functional, or durable”。

  * 第3—6句，就著“中心思想”展開(kāi)來(lái)論述。

  * 第3—6句中，有并列的兩部分內(nèi)容。

  * 第3—4句是一部分內(nèi)容，并且，兩句話之間還有【遞進(jìn)】關(guān)系。

  * 第5—6句是并列的另一個(gè)內(nèi)容，兩句話之間是【總分】關(guān)系。

  二、文脈邏輯維度(CC)：*** 尤其重要 ***

  * 整體采用【總分】脈絡(luò)展開(kāi)。

  * 具體見(jiàn)“內(nèi)容維度(TR)”中的說(shuō)明。

  三、詞匯維度(LR)：

  1. a great variety of = “許多各種各樣的”

  2. substitute = “替代品”(可數(shù))

  3. comfortable = “令人感到舒適的”

  4. functional = “有功能性的”

  5. durable = “耐用的”

  6. fabric = “織物”(可數(shù))

  7. lightweight = “輕量的”

  8. wind resistant = “抗風(fēng)的”

  9. warm keeping = “保暖的”

  10. feature = “特點(diǎn)”(可數(shù))

  11. waterproof = “防水的”

  12. be ripped = “被撕壞”

  13. display = “展示”(及物動(dòng)詞)

  14. tickle = “滿足”(及物動(dòng)詞)

  15. vanity = “虛榮”

  16. manufacturer = “生產(chǎn)商”(可數(shù))

  17. mindset = “心態(tài)”

  18. join = “加入、參與”(及物動(dòng)詞)

  19. campaign = “活動(dòng)”

  20. rare = “少見(jiàn)的”

  21. delicate = “精湛的”

  22. craftsmanship = “做工”

  四、語(yǔ)法和句型維度(GRA)：

  * 本段沒(méi)有特殊的句型，都是基礎(chǔ)句型喲，并不影響把作文寫(xiě)好。