雅思寫作是中國考生們的一大頭疼科目，也是難以提高的科目。新航道老師分享小作文的柱圖 四個(gè)城市垃圾處理方式，希望能對(duì)即將要參加考試的烤鴨們有所幫助!

  【柱圖/條狀圖】，一定可以【轉(zhuǎn)化】為【表格】，如下：

  但是，【柱圖/條狀圖】的表現(xiàn)【優(yōu)勢(shì)】在于【直觀】。需注意，仔細(xì)觀察，本圖同個(gè)地區(qū)的總數(shù)均為100%，因此本圖也可能以【餅圖】的形式出現(xiàn)。

  【開頭段】

  通常兩句話

  1. Shown in the bar chart are the four approaches of refuse disposal, and four cities – Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumper, and Amman - are taken a look at.

  2. Overall, citizens’ reliance varies to a notable extent within each city, with recycling and compost remaining less relied.

  第一句話：說明【圖的主題】。and前為完全倒裝，正常語序是：XXX are shown in the…。同時(shí)注意，題目中給出的地點(diǎn)狀語，可以在轉(zhuǎn)述時(shí)拆開，寫成單獨(dú)一句，兩個(gè)短破折可引出【同位語的插入】，對(duì)具體四個(gè)城市解釋說明。【詞匯層面】refuse n. 垃圾，是常見單詞不常見意思。disposal為環(huán)境類話題高頻詞。

  第二句話：寫對(duì)于圖中數(shù)據(jù)的【宏觀綜述】，with后是獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。

  【主體部分第1段】

  寫兩個(gè)以<填埋>為主要方式的城市

  1. In Toronto and Amman, people show most reliance on landfill.

  2. Specifically, Toronto is noteworthy, as it witnesses that three quarters of waste is landfilled, with the percentage far dwarfing that of other methods, at about 7%.

  3. Likewise, Amman disposes of nearly a half of waste by landfill and another two fifths by incineration, while the total percentage of two remainders is merely over 10%.

  注意下劃線的部分：1)豐富句子主語;2)【伴隨狀語】的使用，來補(bǔ)充說明一些信息。

  第一句話：本段主題句，點(diǎn)明本段數(shù)據(jù)的共同點(diǎn)。同時(shí)詞匯方面注意，四種處理方式均為環(huán)境類話題高頻詞，可學(xué)習(xí)。

  第二句話：使用dwarf等詞的比較句式，一定要檢查比較對(duì)象是否一致。此處，that指代the percentage.

  第三句話：呈上啟下，說明Amman也是填埋使用最多。注意使用“XX be XX”主系表結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)，一定要保證主語和表語是同一類型。

  【主體部分第2段】

  寫兩個(gè)以<焚燒>為主要方式的城市

  1. By stark contrast, incineration is the predominant mode in two remaining cities.

  2. It disposes of two fifths of the rubbish in Madrid and over a half in Kuala Lumper.

  3. Such a situation contrasts sharply with that of compost, which only deals with less than 10% of the waste.

  4. In both cities, over one fifth of total refuse is recycled, and the rest of it is dealt with by landfill, the second reliant option in Madrid while the third relied one in Kuala Lumper.

  注意下劃線的部分：豐富句子主語。

  第一句話：處理方式作主語。

  第二句話：it指代前文的incineration。

  第三句話：抽象名詞作主語。依舊保證比較對(duì)象一致，that指代situation。

  第四句話：the second reliant option及之后內(nèi)容，是同位語，作landfill的解釋說明。

  【結(jié)尾段】

  通常一句話(開頭有總述，本段可有可無)

  1. In general, both the disparity and the similarity are apparent.

  重申對(duì)于圖中數(shù)據(jù)的【宏觀綜述】。