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摘要:新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年8月27日雅思大作文范文及解析:危險運動是否應該被禁止。
新航道上海學校雅思頻道 小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2022年8月27日雅思大作文范文及解析:危險運動是否應該被禁止。
2022年8月27日雅思大作文題目
Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
高分范文及解析
Introduction
While some argue that the authority should prohibit its citizens from partaking the sports that may render them severely injured, I entertain the view that people ought to have the freedom to decide what kind of sports they can opt for when the danger of such sports can actually be manageable.
解析
體育相關的雙邊討論。兩邊都帶should,可討論原因,也可討論利弊。相關話題:Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
prohibit (sb. from doing sth.) vt. 禁止某人做某事
partake vt. 參加
render vt. 使
entertain vt. 持有,懷有
opt for vi. 選擇
manageable adj. 可處理的;易操作的
Body 1
It is justifiable for some to oppose dangerous activities like extreme sports. This is mainly because such sports challenge people’s physiological limits, with great safety risks underlying. Once accidents pop up, partakers will be under threat of injury or even death. In other words, dangerous sports are more likely to injure athletes than common sports, as they require extreme demands for strength, resilience, and adaptability to the risky environment. For instance, rock-climbers are prone to fatal falls, while runners may merely sprain their ankles. Considering the danger of such activities, the government should take actions to prevent its citizens from putting their lives at risk. // However, such detriments can actually be minimized. As participants undergo professional training and take full precautions, the risks have been reduced to extremely low.
解析
讓步-禁止:挑戰人的生理極限,存在安全隱患,甚至威脅生命 à 政府禁止可以保障基本安全// 反駁:保持警惕,采取有效的措施,可以降低風險
physiological adj. 生理的
pop up vi. 突然出現
be under treat of 受到…的威脅
resilience n.[U] 適應能力
fatal fall n. 致命的墜落
sprain vt. 扭傷
put…at risk vt. 把…置于危險中
precaution n.[C] 預防措施
Body 2
However, such an injunction is highly likely to be a nanny-state regulation, as it develops into excessive governing and thus violates people’s liberty. As a matter of fact, most adult citizens are aware of what they are doing as well as of the consequences of participating in such dangerous activities. They may appreciate the good intent behind this ban but get annoyed by the excessive interference. As there are diverse talents and hobbies for each person in the sports, the preference of different groups should be respected. Additionally, such activities can inspire unlimited potential and explosive power, hone people’s will, and allow participants to constantly break through themselves. Risktakers ought to have the freedom to enjoy the sense of exhilaration and fulfilment.
解析
立論-有自由:(1)尊重個體的愛好自由與差異,同時也要相信,人們出于對自己生命的珍惜,會做好相應的措施規避風險;(2)危險運動比常規運動更激發潛力,磨練意志,培養突破自我的能力
injunction n.[C] 禁制令
nanny-state n. 保姆政府
interference n. 干涉
hone vt. 磨練
exhilaration n. 興奮
Conclusion
In a nutshell, risky though dangerous sports seem, people should have the freedom to opt for the sports they are fond of, especially when the underlying danger can be manageable.
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