2016年10月22日的雅思考試涉及的是犯罪題材。主題是：In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?電視應該播放罪犯審判現場嗎?

  雅思寫作大作文解析：

  以往犯罪題材一般問犯罪的原因，罪犯的懲罰方式，避免犯罪的方法等，但這次要求討論的話題稍微轉換了一個方式，問的是電視播放犯罪審判這個做法到底是好還是壞?可見雅思作文命題非常靈活，備考雅思時適當了解各類題材的基本寫法和基本詞匯當然非常必要，但若不提高自己的寫作實力或者規范自己的寫作思維方式，一味抱著背到現題的心態，是很難在雅思寫作中奏效的。

  那么，在本次作文的審題中，我們發現兩個關鍵詞，一是犯罪審判(criminal trials)，二是電視播放(shown on TV)。關于電視播放廣告的優劣勢這樣的題目我們不會陌生，但電視里播放犯罪審判又是一種什么樣的情形呢?關鍵是：討論這樣的題目，我們應該從哪里著手開始呢?經常看唐老師本專欄的同學一定不會陌生唐老師提出的雅思寫作“三大層次”說，即物質層次、心理層次和社會層次(請在文章最下方處回看本專欄各期，一定要掌握精髓并在寫作中有意識地使用，可以在很大程度上解決雅思作文“寫什么”這一難題!)。如果我們將這三大層次用于“電視播放犯罪審判”這個話題，我們就可得到如下一些可用的觀點：

  贊同：(1)看電視審判犯人，我們可以學到很多關于法律的知識(物質層面);(2)電視審判犯人，可以讓觀眾內心感到害怕，從而不敢犯罪(心理層面);(3)電視審判，關注面大，從而使審判顯得更加公正(社會層面)。

  反對：(1)電視審判犯人，必定將犯罪細節公之于眾，這在某種程度上是在宣傳暴力(物質層面);(2)因為知道要電視播放，法官和律師的注意力往往從案件審理轉移到電視作秀，不利于法律的正常實施(心理層面和社會層面)。

  以下是新航道雅思培訓唐老師關于本次的雅思寫作范文，烤鴨們不要錯過哦!

  唐老師觀點：作為公民，我們有權利知道犯人是如何得到審判的，因此我贊同電視審判犯人，但是電視審判中也要注意控制那些不宜播放的犯罪細節，并降低電視媒介對審判過程的不良影響。

  Whether criminal trials should be shown on TV or not has always been a controversialissue. After discussing the advantages of this practice and its disadvantages, I come to believe televising criminal trials is a good thing as long as its negative effects are brought well under control.

  (1) 本段引出話題，明確觀點。這種寫法中規中矩，不出奇，但也不會出大問題。(2) controversial adj. 有爭議的(3) bring something well under control 很好地控制......(4) “電視播放罪犯審判”這一表達是本文的核心所在，需要反復提及，英文中要注意使用替換，本段提供了兩個表達法：criminal trials (are) shown on TV; televising criminal trials。

  Showing criminal trials on TV can serve multiple purposes at the same time such as educational, deterrent and regulatory. When watching how criminals are tried and sentenced, TV viewers will learn a great deal about the law and the legal system. In fact, it was from a televised trial that I understood it is a violation of law if you do not stop your car when you see a stop sign. Meanwhile, TV trials can help bring down the crime rate. People are fearful of their faces shown on TV after they commit crimes because it is generally considered as a disgrace to the family. Finally, aware that they are watched by the general public, the lawyers and judges will have to make sure that the law is followed strictly and the justice is done to the highest standards.

  (2) 本段討論電視審判的三個好處，并在第一句中具體地概括出來，然后分別論述(每個點使用2句)。(2) multiple adj. 多樣的;多種的(3) deterrent adj. 威懾性的(4) regulatory adj. 調節的;規范的(5) sentence v. 除了做“句子”講，還有“判刑”的意思。(6) bring down = reduce 降低(7) Aware that they..., the lawyers and judges...，這個句型是形容詞短語前置作狀語。高分作文中，句式靈活變化是必要的，因此平時要注意積累和練習。

  Admittedly, TV trials, particularly the live shows, may bring about negative effects as well. Often the TV trials will present a lot of details of the criminal offenses such as killing,embezzling, cheating, so much so that they become a promotion of these crimes. As a matter of fact, many juvenile offenders admit they have been under great influences of TV criminal shows. More importantly, in TV criminal trials, lawyers and judges may often pay more attention to their own personal images to the TV viewers, thus forgetting the real purpose of the trial, which is to find if a person is guilty or innocent and in this way, the justice may be sacrificed.

  (3) 本段討論電視審判可能帶來的消極影響，包括對觀眾的影響和法官的影響。(2) bring about 帶來;產生(3) embezzle v. 貪污(4) juvenile adj. 青少年的(5) “罪犯”的不同說法：law-breaker; criminal; law-offender; law-violator

  However, I personally do like the idea of putting criminal trials on TV. Besides telling us right from wrong in a more vivid way and preempting us from committing crimes, TV trials will let us know how the punishment is meted out and how justice is done. This, I believe, is what our basic civil right is all about.

  (4) 本段提出自己的觀點。對于雙邊討論型作文題目，在“自己觀點”段中，最重要的是提出自己判斷的標準。本文的標準是：我們有權利知道罪犯的審判過程。(2) preempt v. 預先阻止(3) mete out punishment 量刑

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