新航道上海學(xué)校雅思頻道小編第一時(shí)間帶來(lái)分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對(duì)各位備考考生們有所幫助，對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作有所提高!本文是2020年11月28日雅思大作文范文及解析：極限運(yùn)動(dòng)應(yīng)該被禁止嗎?

  2020年11月28日 雅思大作文題目

  Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

  高分范文及解析

  01

  The more enthusiasts partake in extreme sports, the more dangers are mentioned. But the truth is that the dangers of such activities are manageable, so why ban them at all?

  解析

  1. 背景信息的鋪墊要簡(jiǎn)潔且扣題;

  2. 立場(chǎng)清晰簡(jiǎn)明：危險(xiǎn)是可控的，又何來(lái)禁止一說(shuō)?

  3. 特別需要注意因果關(guān)系：以原因接上句作本句主干。

  02

  What is acceptable risk for these partakers may be unacceptable for others.To those who fear, extreme sports are more prone to injure people than other common sports, as they place extreme demands on strength, stamina and adaptability to the perilous environment. High-altitude challenges – skydiving and bungee jumping, for example, drastically increase the risk of heart attack, and others like rock-climbing may cause head injuries or even fatal falls. Inherently dangerous as these activities seem, they have always been safety-conscious. With participants undergoing rigorous training and assessment and with professionals accompanying, the danger coefficient has been reduced to extremely low.

  解析

  1. 本段質(zhì)疑對(duì)極限運(yùn)動(dòng)危險(xiǎn)系數(shù)高這一觀點(diǎn);

  2. 論證：為了豐富論證，通過(guò)舉例具體化這些活動(dòng)的危險(xiǎn)性;

  3. 論證：同時(shí)，駁倒這一危險(xiǎn)說(shuō);

  4. 措辭：本段主要結(jié)合使用了各類(lèi)形式的從句、讓步倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)、獨(dú)立主格。

  03

  With this in mind, people should objectively treat extreme sports, not hastily take out an injunction against it. As a matter of fact, these events, in the form of adventure, free thrill-seekers from traditional stadiums and lead them to head out into the wilderness, where human potential could be evoked and human limits challenged. The excitement and exhilaration generated from this is unparalleled in other sports and can be a great stress reliever. From an ability-development point of view, many extreme moves, such as diving and scrambling, require millions of exercises. This, frustration education, builds trainees’ independence and perseverance. There seems to be no strong reason, then, to ban participants from getting involved.

  解析

  1. 本段回應(yīng)題干繼續(xù)回應(yīng)是否應(yīng)該禁止極限運(yùn)動(dòng)這一問(wèn)題;

  2. 論證：以說(shuō)理的形式，羅列出其對(duì)參與者感官及能力上的影響;

  3. 措辭：除了插入語(yǔ)的頻繁使用外，本段還用了押首韻的修辭手法。

  04

  In conclusion, the world’s hunger for extreme sports cannot be curbed. Therefore, as long as the thrill-seekers understand the underlying risks and are capable of managing them, I would say they could try whatever extreme sports they like.

  解析

  1. 結(jié)論概述上文即可;

  2. 可以適當(dāng)添加一些期待，如希望參與者理解且有能力管控風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。