九色视频在线播放/亚洲地区电影mv/麻豆成人久久精品二区三区小说/91精品免费视频 - 不用花钱就能看亏亏网站

歡迎來到上海新航道學校官網！出國語言培訓，就上新航道！

上海學校

  • 課程
  • 資訊

4008-125-888

全部課程導航

2020年12月3日雅思大作文范文及解析：年輕人應該遵循傳統，還是率性而為?

2021/1/22 16:45:47來源：新航道作者：新航道

摘要：新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2020年12月3日雅思大作文范文及解析：年輕人應該遵循傳統，還是率性而為?

  新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2020年12月3日雅思大作文范文及解析：年輕人應該遵循傳統，還是率性而為?


  2020年12月3日雅思大作文題目

  Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of the society. Others think young people are free to behave as individuals.

  Discuss both views and give your opinion.


  高分范文及解析

  01

  Some young people are ashamed of the adherence to tradition, while strongly advocating rebellion and freedom. To me, tradition has never been a yoke to freedom.

  解析

  立場：遵循傳統和率性而為不矛盾

  02

  Young individuals identified as independent-minded usually behave differently from their conservative peers. Their less conventional behavior stems from the resistance to some traditional customs, lifestyles or thoughts that should have been eliminated in today’s society. With these outdated values — the obsession with a permanent job and the stereotype of men being the breadwinners while women the housewives — in mind, how could young adults be innovative? If that is the case, then why bother with these values?

  解析

  內容：討論率性而為的理。

  論證：抽象話題寫作，在論述過程中要“接地氣”，化抽象為具體是關鍵。

  措辭：所選詞的正負評價性要妥當，當需要“破除老舊的傳統觀念”時，措辭如outdated, obsession, stereotype等都是貶義向的用詞。

  措辭：以問句的形式推進邏輯論證

  03

  However, if all the traditions set by predecessors are removed, what remains would be a disorderly society, where non-compliance becomes the only rule. As a matter of fact, the freedom of behaving as individuals, in many cases, is not contradictory to following the tradition, i.e positive ones. Simply put, it is hard to imagine one person deliberately disrespecting others, just to flaunt individuality, and why diligence or patriotism, traditional virtues like these, cannot be used as individual labels? At the same time, preaching individuality may signify selfishness and irresponsibility. Encouraging the young to violate tradition, the propagation is a discontinuation of one's social identity, but to members of society, as inter-dependent individuals, it is an obligation to perpetuate this social identity in the community.

  解析

  內容：討論遵循傳統的理由

  論證：抽象話題寫作，在論述過程中要“接地氣”，化抽象為具體是關鍵

  措辭：以問句的形式加強論證力度

  04

  In conclusion, abiding by the tradition of society and behaving as individuals can co-exist. What a young person chooses to do depends on what kind of individual he or she wants to be.

  解析

  總結上文信息，加上適度的展望

免費獲取資料

免責聲明
1、如轉載本網原創文章，情表明出處
2、本網轉載媒體稿件旨在傳播更多有益信息，并不代表同意該觀點，本網不承擔稿件侵權行為的連帶責任；
3、在本網博客/論壇發表言論者，文責自負。

旗艦校區：上海徐匯區文定路209號寶地文定商務中心1樓 乘車路線：地鐵1/4號線上海體育館、3/9號線宜山路站、11號線上海游泳館站

電話：4008-125-888

版權所有：上海胡雅思投資管理有限公司 滬ICP備11042568號-1