新航道上海學校雅思頻道小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2020年11月14日雅思大作文范文及解析：保護環境，個人真的無能為力嗎?

  2020年11月14日 雅思大作文題目

  Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions.

  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  高分范文及解析

  01

  Is environmental improvement beyond individuals' ability? Or should we count on every individual and believe that individuals' little actions can make a difference? Neither of the two questions have a simple answer.

  解析

  * 開頭段落的最佳方案就是三言兩語就結束。可以設計的玄機是設問，即自問自答。

  * 開頭段落的遣詞造句不要過分講究，也就是不要在選詞的時候用力過猛。如果可以有一些習語性的表達或用詞(比如本段中的beyond somebody's ability和count on)，效果就很好。

  02

  Individuals may be incapable, in their knowledge and means, of solving environmental problems. This difficulty is evident in China during the recent time when a number of cities are asking residents to sort out household refuse before it is tossed. Not until this policy have many residents realized their lack of knowledge about the classification. More difficult than the lack of knowledge, people's lack of means is a bigger problem. Hardly can individual citizens be technologically or financially capable of solving environmental problems, since those problems are usually on a large scale or stubborn or the solution costs colossal amounts of money.

  解析

  * body部分的第一段回應第一個觀點。

  * 論證：可以說用一兩句的舉例來說一個現實的情況。注意：不要把整個段落寫成就是在舉一個例子。也可以講明白一個道理。這個段落，兩個展開段落內容的方法都用到了。

  * 遣詞造句：尤其注意兩處倒裝現象，以及狀語形式的多樣。

  03

  Recognizing the difficulties does not mean we are giving in to them. Little actions, such as tossing waste into the right bins, can reduce our impact on the environment; small changes, such as using fuel-efficient ways of transportation, can reduce our carbon footprints. In addition, although we are unable to improve manufacturing, which is a major source of pollution, we can choose products made of alternative materials whose use and disposal are easy on the environment, and as a result, businesses may become environmentally conscious about their production. Those efforts may seem insignificant on individual level, but they will lead to a tremendous change if we count more and more people in and let time prove the effect.

  解析

  * body部分的第二段回應第二個觀點。

  * 論證：可以說用一兩句的舉例來說一個現實的情況。注意：例子不要成為整個段落的內容。也可以講明白一個道理。這個段落，兩個辦法都用到了。

  * 遣詞造句和文脈：尤其注意句子的設計并不浮華，但是句子之間的關系和銜接，讓段落可以倍快速讀完和容易理解。

  04

  In the face of environmental problems, we do not expect individuals to do everything, given the cost that is beyond individual capacity. We also believe that some of the things are within individuals' ability to do.

  解析

  * 結尾段落處不貪戀篇幅或者復雜的語言現象。回應了body部分提及的內容，起到總結的作用即可。